doodle (s) The Horrible Fanfare/Landslide

[xkittenxsocksx]

I'm no artist and I need feedback so bitch the fuck away at me please:

conor oberst





I realise the background shading is nothing but it's only filler.

[Spastic]

I loved the Edward Norton sketch, looked just like him! Just like you said though, the background shading needs work, but if it's only filler then I am guessing these are works in progress? If so I can't wait to see them when completely finished.

[xkittenxsocksx]

I loved the Edward Norton sketch, looked just like him! Just like you said though, the background shading needs work, but if it's only filler then I am guessing these are works in progress? If so I can't wait to see them when completely finished.

I want to put them on canvas but I'm not feeling up to it, I will soon though.
Thanks for the critique.

[Relaps]

Your John Peel looks more like Bill Murray.

All three are really well done. Good job.

[Urser]

Your John Peel looks more like Bill Murray.

I was going to say the exact same thing. Although, I've never seen this 'John Peel'.

They're really good though! It's just that the first one isn't loading for me.

[Axidos]

Never seen or heard of any of these people, and your first image gives me a photobucket-style 404.

That aside, your last two are great. Proportions and general positioning are just right, and shading's in the right spots. I can't see a thing wrong, other than purple (red?) on blue doesn't have much contrast.

[xkittenxsocksx]

Ah sorry for the broken link, I've replaced it.

[Assassin]

They look cool. But I think they would be really awesome on canvas

[TheHighwaySong]

All of them are very well done! Especially the Edward Norton one.

[Godly]

They are all surprisingly good for someone who's "not an artist".

Conor Oberst is my favorite.

[I Lick Vaginas]

I'd like to see the lines/edges cleaned up a bit. Some places the pencil bleeds into, say, the arms a little too much.

John Peel is the best in terms of execution.
Oh, and I think you forgot an eyebrow on the third one?

Would love to see these on canvas, definitely.