Since everyone are posting their blogs.

[Mirrorman]

You may as well check out mine.
http://emopoemss.blogspot.com/
You can probably tell by the name, whats it about. Poems. So yeah. Check them out or whatever.
PS. I just do them out of bare boredom, I do NOT cut myself, okay?

[Jiggz]

WOAH! I thought you were creepy before, but this is just a little too far.

[Tweek]

Why don't you do poems about nice things?

[Mirrorman]

WOAH! I thought you were creepy before, but this is just a little too far.

Well I thank you.
Edit- Tweek: It's much easier about shit like that and its fucking funny.
But I'll think about it.

[Beatzebs]

EMO! >P

[Peachy]

"When I see you there
In your new wooden shirt
I just cant help to share
My feelings as I see you in a skirt
I never knew you were so pretty
As a beautiful sunset
Setting behind the horizon
Why did I always treat you so shitty
And now you’re dead
Dead as my family dog
To think of it, you were a fucking dog"

Somebody call Bob Dylan, he's been doing it wrong all these years...this is magic.

[Mirrorman]

"When I see you there
In your new wooden shirt
I just cant help to share
My feelings as I see you in a skirt
I never knew you were so pretty
As a beautiful sunset
Setting behind the horizon
Why did I always treat you so shitty
And now you’re dead
Dead as my family dog
To think of it, you were a fucking dog"

Somebody call Bob Dylan, he's been doing it wrong all these years...this is magic.

Explain please?

[exetra]

I was hoping this would be satirical, if that's the intention then you need to be a little less subtle.

[Godly]

You have two choices:

LIGHTEN THE FUCK UP.
or
Just kill yourself already :|

[xkittenxsocksx]

You have two choices:

LIGHTEN THE FUCK UP.
or
Just kill yourself already :|

seconded

It comes across as if you're trying too hard and only scratching the surface of what you hope to evoke.

[potolife]

Okay, to start off: what the HELL? I don't mean to be rude, but do you honestly think these are good? I'm can't tell whether they're supposed to be freestyle or have some sort of rhythm and rhyme to them. Half of the time you have a meter to a line, and a line that rhymes a little bit later, but then the rest is just . . . there. They pretty much sound like things a grammar school student would right, with no real message or feel to them. Every poem, freestyle or not, as some sort of message or story and its own flow. Your's lack both.

[Tweek]

Well they are pretty good as emo poems.

[Mirrorman]

They aren't really meant to be really like deep or something. It's not like I speak from my heart or anything :indiff: .

[Jiggz]

They aren't really meant to be really like deep or something. It's not like I speak from my heart or anything :indiff: .

Are you being intentionally funny? I need to figure out if I'm laughing with you or at you.

[Grudge)86]

Okay, to start off: what the HELL? I don't mean to be rude, but do you honestly think these are good? I'm can't tell whether they're supposed to be freestyle or have some sort of rhythm and rhyme to them. Half of the time you have a meter to a line, and a line that rhymes a little bit later, but then the rest is just . . . there. They pretty much sound like things an grammar school student would right, with no real message or feel to them. Every poem, freestyle or not, as some sort of message or story and its own flow. Your's lack both.

I just wanted to point out the irony.

I agree. The rhythm is lacking, and a lot of the rhymes seem forced.

[Tweek]

I just wanted to point out the irony.

I agree. The rhythm is lacking, and a lot of the rhymes seem forced.
Hence, emo poems.

[Mirrorman]

Are you being intentionally funny? I need to figure out if I'm laughing with you or at you.

With me thank you very much.
Actually I'm really happy with my life and don't want to kill myself like a few of you suggested :indiff: . To write this shit, I don't really have to be one you know. I suggest you to look out of that mainstream box of yours.

[Quadros]

If you're taking the piss write about how your parents won't let you see Simple Plan of a shool night and how that exposes the BARRENESS OF YOUR SOUL. If not then just jump off a bridge.

[potolife]

I just wanted to point out the irony.

I agree. The rhythm is lacking, and a lot of the rhymes seem forced.

:wail: Damn. That's probably because I wrote "an elementary school student" first. Oh well, now I have to go edit that.

With me thank you very much.
Actually I'm really happy with my life and don't want to kill myself like a few of you suggested . To write this shit, I don't really have to be one you know. I suggest you to look out of that mainstream box of yours.

For me, it's not the whole "emo" aspect of it. It's that the poem lacks something more. It seems like you just thought "Oh I wrote three lines now the fourth one needs to rhyme" and tacked a word on at the end. And since when is writing shitty poetry such a difficult thing that we all can't appreciate because we're in our "mainstream box"?

[Pyro]

Some of the rhyming is awful, but hey, atleast they're emo, which they're meant to be. They might be fun to write but you can't really expect too much good reviews, because how many people do you know who like emo poems?

[Godly]

With me thank you very much.
Actually I'm really happy with my life and don't want to kill myself like a few of you suggested :indiff: . To write this shit, I don't really have to be one you know. I suggest you to look out of that mainstream box of yours.


Then why bother writing shitty emo crap? Write actual poems about things that don't revolve around killing yourself.

And "look out of that mainstream box"? What a joke, just cause you write some fucking emo poems doesn't make you some fucking amazing poet who's "not like anyone else" who is original and shit like that. Just cause things are mainstream doesn't mean they aren't good, things get to be mainstream cause they are good. And just cause you write some idiotic poems about being emo(when you aren't you stupid poser) doesn't make you a freaking non-mainstream writer. It's ludicrous to even think that writing poems in a certain style makes them better.

You make me unhappy.

[Mirrorman]

Then why bother writing shitty emo crap? Write actual poems about things that don't revolve around killing yourself.

And "look out of that mainstream box"? What a joke, just cause you write some fucking emo poems doesn't make you some fucking amazing poet who's "not like anyone else" who is original and shit like that. Just cause things are mainstream doesn't mean they aren't good, things get to be mainstream cause they are good. And just cause you write some idiotic poems about being emo(when you aren't you stupid poser) doesn't make you a freaking non-mainstream writer. It's ludicrous to even think that writing poems in a certain style makes them better.

You make me unhappy.

I wasn't saying I'm special. I said that you're mainstream because you think that only emos can write poems like that.

[Tweek]

I wasn't saying I'm special. I said that you're mainstream because you think that only emos can write poems like that.
Poems like what? Worthless shit?
I supported you up until now, I understood what you were going for and I got it.
But come on man, this stuff isn't that great.
They aren't really any accomplishment in poetry, and they drip with misplaced angst.
They are crybaby shit - the very definition of emo poems.
Let's just leave it at that.

[Godly]

I wasn't saying I'm special. I said that you're mainstream because you think that only emos can write poems like that.

How the fucking hell does that make me mainstream? And I never said only emos can write crappy poems like that, but you have to have some kind of depressive side of you if you only write emo shite like that.

Also, guess what, not everything that's not depressive/emo/goth is mainstream. So how exactly do you justify myself being mainstream cause I find your stupid poems, well, stupid?

I'll stop arguing with you now cause there's no way I can win against an idiot of your caliber.

[Fodniethan]

They're not very good, even by emo poem standards.

[Mirrorman]

Anyway, I'm changing the language and the theme of the blog so it's no use in here anymore.