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Hats of!
01-25-2008, 3:13 PM
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs22/f/2008/025/3/0/Kirby_Rox_by_Malmhake.jpg
Yeah...
Done in flash and so on.
http://malmhake.deviantart.com/art/Kirby-Rox-75576826
It's alright, but it's also lacking details. For example your ninja looking guy has no bum, he just looks like he has legs coming out of his hips. It's really only little things, but the little things are what make a difference.
Hats of!
01-25-2008, 3:59 PM
That's Solid Snake!
Relaps
01-25-2008, 3:59 PM
That's solid snake.
It's not bad Hats, but snake's back looks a little off to me.
EDIT: posted seconds before me.
Hats of!
01-25-2008, 4:35 PM
He's just been sliced by Kirby, shouldn't he look off?
Relaps
01-25-2008, 5:19 PM
Fair enough, but shouldn't the blood be on the other side of the blade? I'm guessing he's doing his cutter technique where he launches up and slams down. Since he's launching up through Snake, the blood would be on the other side wouldn't it?
Richard_Simmons
01-25-2008, 6:28 PM
Bollocks is right, it should be other side.
What is that little cable from his back to his right arm? Is that even a cable?
I liked it. Good art. I'd rate it a 9/10.
Mr Anorexia
01-25-2008, 6:32 PM
I think Solid Snake has fingers.
I like it, mainly 'cause it has Kirby.
Depending on how he is cutting the other dude, the blood should be on either side. If he just launched himself up through the other dude, then the blood should be on the other side. But then he could be, like, hacking at him? Like a baseball bat, how you would just slam it down onto it's body over and over and over..
Good job though. I would rate it an 8 out of 10, as it just seems to me to lack enough detail.
Knight of Cydonia
01-26-2008, 8:02 AM
Nice work. Snake and Kirby are well drawn and I would give it a 8.5/10.
The Super Hannah
01-26-2008, 9:11 AM
Its good. But is left leg looks like it has no bones in it.
PyroOwned
01-26-2008, 2:26 PM
It's cool, I like it. It needs to be more cartoony if it's Kirby though.
Good job. :thup:
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