WH40K

[Hyphen]

Just some Warhammer 40k stuff, all in pencil:

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u182/hyphen_hyphen/chaos.jpg
http://1337www.deviantart.com/art/Chaos-Pencil-61397913

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u182/hyphen_hyphen/kharn.jpg
http://1337www.deviantart.com/art/Two-Betrayals-63205558

Anyone else into WH40k? Hope you like :)
Crit welcome

[Hats of!]

Good shading and all that stuff.
But I think you should continue drawing bodies. So you can make the hands and such a bit more realistic.

[ne3]

I like the shading you did, and other stuff, exept from the chaos characters, they have way bigger heads, the rest I can't really put my finger on. But improve the body drawings as Hats Of! said.

[BartS]

As stated before, nice shading and stuff, but you need to work on the hands.

EDIT: Oh, by the way. Maybe it's just me, but I can't figure out what the thing on the right on the first drawing is. I see a sword, and some teeth.. Is it in some weird angle or something?

[Relaps]

I see a sword, and some teeth.. Is it in some weird angle or something?

Warhammer's Space Marines have Chainsaw Swords.


Oh, you meant the creature. Yeah, kinda wondering that myself.

[Kirschrollen]

Looks like a typical teenager's doodles, but spread out on a large canvas and filled in very well. Perspective of one section clashes with another, and the bodies are awkwardly drawn - this is no biggie, though, as practice makes perfect.

[Lamb]

It's fucking awesome if you don't mind the hands and lack of proportion

[Rob]

The detail is well thought-out, but you should put more work into proportions and poses so your characters don't look ridiculous.

[SWiTCH]

The first one is awesome. The demon is looks great, and the marine looks ok. Nice dreadnought in the background.

The second one (Kharn the Betrayer?) looks like it would be awesome if the proportions were more correct.

I can't get enough 40k art...
I'll watch on DA.

[Jiggz]

Attention to detail, shading and content is awesome. But like Rob said, study comic books for more dramatic, dynamic poses. Or your well drawn characters just seem moronic.

I have a book on action comic style drawing by the man himself, Stan Lee. Look it up, it's an awesome resource for shading technics, how to pose figures and a whole bunch more.

[lollercaust]

The first one is awesome. The demon is looks great, and the marine looks ok. Nice dreadnought in the background.


That's a defiler. :)

Likewise, I like the first one the best. Although I feel the raptor could be a bit better, just redrawn. Nice detailing, always good to see Warhammer art.