Original Composition - Why Am I Feeling So Hungry?

[SladeMadeFilms]

Forgive the production quality, I got some better equipment being shipped for future songs.

http://slademadefilms.com/myspacemusic/hungry.mp3

[horni-horse16]

I hope this was a joke. That song was so repetitive I couldn't finish listening to it.

[Android]

I sure hope your new equipment comes with a side of talent.

[SladeMadeFilms]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure I ordered some of that too. I think it comes with free shipping.

[Pelican Man]

Your guitar sounds shit, and the guitar line is repetitive and horrible, the drums don't fit with the guitar, the lyrics suck, the vocals are abysmal. Oh god, the piano just came in. What a suitable way to end a horrible song; with a horrible piano line that doesn't fit and overall gives everyone the knowledge that you are, in fact, horrible at music altogether.
Congratulations.

Now someone close and dump this horrible, horrible joke of a thread.

[green rubber bands]

Hungry for talent? :eyebrow:

[cabhats]

wow... I listened till the singing started. Vocals sound really forced and choked at the same time. Also repeats too much... way too much. Shouldn't the intro be at least a little different to the verse and stuff?

[Pancakes]

You need to pratice.

[tunacake]

Holy peas Pelican Man.
How could you say something like th---
Nevermind.

[Idioteque]

Was it meant as a joke? Because even as a joke song it kinda blew.