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C00P_88
08-29-2007, 12:51 AM
"Instructions:
The Judges will give you a topic or an idea and you need to make a comic about it. You'll be marked on:

Joke - The funnier the better. (?/5)
Art - The less I want to gouge my eyes out the better. (?/5)
Creativity/Predictability - If it's the first panel and I guess the punchline, good luck next time. (?/5)"

36 hours to make 3 comics from when I say go. Marked out of 15 for each comic. If you only make 1 or 2, too bad. you can get marked on those two and lose 15 points for the other one.

Ok...These are the rules for the last one so I think they're pretty good, it just failed cos of TOs...hopefully I wont get any and this will work cos its a cool idea.

I would like 16 comic makers and I want to be one of them.

I would also like a panel of 5 Judges. People who are good at critique but dont wanna make comics.

Comic Makers: -
1.C00P_88Done
2.KevoskDone
3.StealthPrawnDone
4.FarOut
5.MistyOut
6.TheHipOrangePlatypusSilo Out
7.SavarilDone
8.RelapsDone
9.IAteYourPetDone
10.UberMegatronDone
11.UrsernameDone
12.Hats Of!Done
13.I SmellNone as Yet
14.nVmDone
15.High6None as Yet
16.LagDone

Judges: -
1.Rebecca.Out
2.Lissa
3.PyroOwen
4.JohnnyJohnson
5.Mr Anorexia

Its now 3:45pm where I am so you have until Noon tomorrow to sign up. Do it in the thread and the first 15 people to say "Im In" are the comic makers and if you wanna judge say "Im a Judge" First 5 are it.

Any ideas and suggestions can be done through PM cos otherwise it'll be too much.

So....sign up!!

Kevosk
08-29-2007, 12:54 AM
I'll sign up, sure.

Just don't get banned like the other two :P.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 12:56 AM
I wont...I dont really post anymore cos of lack of ideas and i only ever posted in the fan art so hopefully this wont fail! :D

Stealth Prawn
08-29-2007, 1:02 AM
I'm in

Far
08-29-2007, 2:27 AM
If this one actually works I'm in.

Rebecca.
08-29-2007, 2:45 AM
If this thing does follow through I'd like to be a judge.

MistyTehMoose
08-29-2007, 2:52 AM
I'll be in.

TheHipOrangePlatypusSilo
08-29-2007, 2:56 AM
I am in!

Savaril
08-29-2007, 3:14 AM
Im in.










What? Oh yeah, as an artist.

:indiff:

Relaps
08-29-2007, 3:15 AM
I'm in as an artist.

Lissa
08-29-2007, 3:20 AM
"I'm a Judge"

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-29-2007, 5:53 AM
I'll join as an artist.

Whorelock
08-29-2007, 5:58 AM
I'll join as an artist too.

Urser
08-29-2007, 6:03 AM
I'll join as an artist too. Comic making is my forte' unlike spriting... :whale:

PyroOwned
08-29-2007, 6:10 AM
I'll be a judge C00P. I've been around the showcase enough to recognise good art from the bad.

Johnny
08-29-2007, 6:44 AM
I've lurked long enough to know the difference between a good comic and a bad comic. Count me in as a judge.

Hats of!
08-29-2007, 6:54 AM
Me sign in?

Vortex
08-29-2007, 9:13 AM
I'll be a judge.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 10:30 AM
5 Judges Are Chosen

4 Spots Left for Comic Makers

1:27am where i am now which leaves 10 and a half hours to sign up

Judges discuss(if you can) and choose the three topics, Post them at 12...10 and a half hours from this post

Competition will start in 10 and a half hours and you will have 36 hours to make your comics

Good Luck!

Hats of!
08-29-2007, 10:41 AM
I'm ready bi-atch.

PyroOwned
08-29-2007, 10:48 AM
The first stage shouldn't be themed so we get a general idea of art, jokes, and originality. Themes should be chosen in the next stages.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 10:51 AM
No..I remade this cos im itching to do comics with a theme so i can...you know...make comics. Im having kinda a mental block at the moment and it happened just after my art got good which sucked!

high6
08-29-2007, 11:22 AM
I'm in(if there still time to signup)

Rebecca.
08-29-2007, 1:44 PM
No..I remade this cos im itching to do comics with a theme so i can...you know...make comics. Im having kinda a mental block at the moment and it happened just after my art got good which sucked!

I agree with Pyro that the first round shouldn't have a theme. I'm sorry, but just because you aren't creative enough to come up with your own material doesn't mean we need to compensate for it.

Far
08-29-2007, 1:57 PM
It's her contest and if she wants a theme she can have one. Either way if there isn't a theme I won't be participating.

junglebunny
08-29-2007, 2:04 PM
I might join if it's a good theme

Rebecca.
08-29-2007, 2:31 PM
It's her contest and if she wants a theme she can have one. Either way if there isn't a theme I won't be participating.

I think that only the first round shouldn't have a theme so the focus is more on the art & having a creative joke so only the best can move on to the next round. The second two rounds would have themes.

Far
08-29-2007, 2:31 PM
I don't have time to think of three good comics in one day all by myself. So if we aren't going to have a theme for any of them, count me out.

I_Smell
08-29-2007, 2:43 PM
Muthafuckin sign me up, dawg.

Relaps
08-29-2007, 3:08 PM
I think the opposite.

I believe there should be themes, and maybe near the end it should be freestyle. That way, the best up to then really have to work to make it funny.

NVM
08-29-2007, 3:26 PM
I think the opposite.

I believe there should be themes, and maybe near the end it should be freestyle. That way, the best up to then really have to work to make it funny.

I agree.
I'm also in.

Mr Anorexia
08-29-2007, 3:35 PM
Anymore room for judging?

Vortex
08-29-2007, 3:57 PM
You can have my spot if you like Mr Anorexia. I don't really think i'm as interested now as I was originally. If its cool with C00P, that is.

NVM
08-29-2007, 4:30 PM
Are the comics supposed to be in a C&H-ish style?

Rebecca.
08-29-2007, 4:37 PM
I think the opposite.

I believe there should be themes, and maybe near the end it should be freestyle. That way, the best up to then really have to work to make it funny.

I like this idea, acutally. Anyone opposed?

Lag
08-29-2007, 4:42 PM
Themes to start off, and since you go along you'll probably get a few good ideas that would be cut due to theme restrictions, so yes. I see it as coming out well.

Also, that was me posting as GoM.

MistyTehMoose
08-29-2007, 5:35 PM
I say stop arguing about the themes and just choose them, already.

But NVM had a good question: is it C&H style?

Lag
08-29-2007, 7:40 PM
So, this thing is starting soon, yes? Any update on list of competitors, themes, rules?

Rebecca.
08-29-2007, 7:56 PM
I'm not sure what's going on. I sent c00p a pm but I don't think she's been online.

BAN ME PLEASE
08-29-2007, 7:59 PM
i'll be a comic maker

NVM
08-29-2007, 8:02 PM
She said that she's not going to give us the themes until an hour and half from now.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 9:07 PM
Competition is ready, lists are final and judges, we need themes.

To answer a few questions: -
Yes C&H style
Themes to start, Freestyle towards the end
Themes should be kinda general, too specific and we'll all be churning out the same jokes.


I didnt want to know what the themes were as i didnt want an unfair advantage so will the judge who knows please post them asap. 36 hours from that post to make comics.

Good Luck!

Mr Anorexia
08-29-2007, 9:24 PM
This theme should be Depressing, much like the depressing comics week. Make them as horrible (in a soul crushing way) as you can.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 9:26 PM
But we're being marked on joke as 5 of our points...Wheres the joke in a depressing comic?

Relaps
08-29-2007, 9:28 PM
I guess substitute Humor with Wail.

C00P_88
08-29-2007, 9:32 PM
0k, so instead of "the funnier the better" "the more depressing the better" Go everyone!

Relaps
08-29-2007, 9:36 PM
Depressing. Got it.

Oh yeah -

ARTISTS: ONLY POST COMICS WHEN YOU FINISH ALL THREE! This keeps them all bunched and orderly.

Kevosk
08-29-2007, 11:09 PM
Three depressing cartoons at a time?

Oh lord...

http://www.nitrogenorder.org/molweek/sep2005/prozac_photo.jpg

Relaps
08-29-2007, 11:11 PM
I'll start my shit in the morning. I've already done a couple comics today.

Kevosk
08-29-2007, 11:12 PM
Do we have to post all three at once?

Relaps
08-29-2007, 11:13 PM
It would be best. Keep things bunched to who makes 'em, and makes it easier for judges.

Avoids things like random comics everywhere.

Stealth Prawn
08-29-2007, 11:15 PM
I'm done my depressing one.

Far
08-29-2007, 11:16 PM
I'm done my depressing one.

You have to do 3.

Lag
08-29-2007, 11:31 PM
Oh god...I need to put off other two till tomorrow...:frown:

Stealth Prawn
08-29-2007, 11:37 PM
I thought there where 3 topics! SONOFABITCH

EDIT- Done 2!

EDIT AGAIN- I'm running out of depressing material. Can't we do one freestyle one?

PyroOwned
08-30-2007, 4:35 AM
No, read the challenge C00P set before entering. If you can't do three, you'll be disqualified. :shobon:

Whorelock
08-30-2007, 4:37 AM
I'm going to post them as I make them into this post.

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8132/depressing1fy0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4604/depressing2ty8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/4621/depressing3vq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PyroOwned
08-30-2007, 4:53 AM
You're breaking competition rules, as you shuld post all 3 at once. Also, make the blood more realistic.

Whorelock
08-30-2007, 5:11 AM
where does it say I have to post them all at once? I only see that we need to put them in the same post.

EDIT: Oh, Relaps. (Sorry)

PyroOwned
08-30-2007, 5:36 AM
UberMegatron
Art 4/5
Jokes 2/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

But don't worry, this challenge is hard to pull off.

Whorelock
08-30-2007, 5:39 AM
It's not meant to have jokes, it's the more depressing the better.

PyroOwned
08-30-2007, 5:54 AM
We're meant to judge on jokes, I just used that part for the depressiveness.

Johnny
08-30-2007, 6:16 AM
UberMegatron

Art 3/5
Jokes/Depressing-ness 4/5
Creativity 3/5

Total 10/15

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-30-2007, 7:44 AM
Aren't the judges meant to give scores for all 3 comics? Oh well here's mine, not that depressing, some are though.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4917/depressing1lo1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Probably the most depressing.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3576/sausagedogjx9.png (http://imageshack.us)
Least depressing but it shows how no matter what you do God'll screw you over, I guess that's pretty depressing.
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5504/twintowersxb8.png (http://imageshack.us)
Hope you like.

Hats of!
08-30-2007, 10:50 AM
I hated this task. It was hard.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1807/depress1ng6.png

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6268/depress2py2.png

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/9682/depress3bx3.png

Lissa
08-30-2007, 12:17 PM
UberMegatron

"Why did she leave me?"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 2/5
Creativity 1/5
Total 6/15

"I CAN FEEL IT"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

"Home sweet home."
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

Total Score: 2.5/5 (7.5/15)

I feel like a bitch. But in all honesty, it's extremely hard to be original. You did well. :mmyes:

===========================

I Ate Your Pet

"Hey son.."
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 10/15

"WHYYYY"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

"We're walking in the air.."
Art 4/5 OMGEXPLOSION
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5 Funnay.
Creativity 4/5
Total 12/15

Total Score: 3.4/5 (10.2/15)

Very nicely done.

===========================

Hats of!

"SPLATT!"
Art 4/5 More fiery fire pls :0
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 It's bad because I lol'd.
Creativity 3/5
Total 12/15

"I'm gonna kill myself."
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 9/15

"*Peep!*"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 D:
Creativity 2/5
Total 10/15

Total Score: 3.4/5 (10.2/15)

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-30-2007, 1:36 PM
Ohh I didn't get that bad a score, but Lissa isn't it out of 4.5 not 5?

Relaps
08-30-2007, 1:54 PM
School
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9105/depress1wb6.jpg

Love
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3115/depress2kj0.jpg

Travel
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/5995/depress3ne3.jpg

Rebecca.
08-30-2007, 2:08 PM
UberMegatron

Art: 4/5
Depressive-ness: 2.5/5
Creativity: 2.5/5
TOTAL: 9/15
For me, you would have scored higher on the "Depressing" section if, in the second comic, you had given your character more of a reason to off himself & actually shown him jumping off whatever it was he did. Your art is good, but the endings were predictable.

I Ate Your Pet

Art: 3.5/5
Depressive-ness: 4/5
Creativity: 4/5
TOTAL: 11.5/15

Your third comic was quite good (I think the most original thus far); the end was a complete surprise & quite depressing. The first one was also pretty depressing, a tad predictable, but with the little kid at the end makes it even more heart-wrenching. Good job.

Hats of!

Art: 5/5
Depressive-ness: 4.5/5
Creativity: 4/5
TOTAL: 13.5/15
I love, love your art & you fit the depressing bill rather well, especially with your third comic. Great job.

Relaps
Art: 5/5
Depressive-ness: 4.5/5
Creativity: 4/5
TOTAL: 13.5/15

Your art is also flawless & you did a great job with the depressing theme. Damn, that first one was awful. Great job Relaps.

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-30-2007, 2:18 PM
I'll be trying harder on the art in later rounds but I was trying to make the comics without forgetting the ideas, I was gonna go back and touch them up a bit but I couldn't be bothered.

Relaps
08-30-2007, 2:20 PM
Thanks Rebbeca.

Oh hey, Pet-Guy. Your third one was like...woah.

SODA
08-30-2007, 2:31 PM
UberMegatron

Art: 4/5
Depressive-ness: 2.5/5
Creativity: 2.5/5
TOTAL: 9/15
For me, you would have scored higher on the "Depressing" section if, in the second comic, you had given your character more of a reason to off himself & actually shown him jumping off whatever it was he did. Your art is good, but the endings were predictable.

Lol... The ending on the second one was predictable?

I thought he did a great job and the second one was funny in a sick way. He offed himself because he got fired, lots of people do it in real life. :/

And relaps all of yours made me laugh except the last one.

DJArchngl
08-30-2007, 2:59 PM
Awww... I missed out on the sign-up... :(

Dodger
08-30-2007, 3:34 PM
Hahaha, great comics guys. Keep it up.

Rebecca.
08-30-2007, 4:24 PM
I thought he did a great job and the second one was funny in a sick way. He offed himself because he got fired, lots of people do it in real life. :/


I know that, that comic just wasn't as depressing as some of the others.

MistyTehMoose
08-30-2007, 5:37 PM
Bah, we have to do three a topic?

I misunderstood the comp, and I has no time. I'm out.

Kevosk
08-30-2007, 5:56 PM
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2133/depressing1kq7.png

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6325/depressing3sy4.png

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2147/depressing4vy0.png

Relaps
08-30-2007, 6:01 PM
Kev, you need three.

And relaps all of yours made me laugh except the last one.

They aren't supposed to.


You're a terrible person.

Kevosk
08-30-2007, 6:04 PM
Oh I know. I'm gonna add a third one when I edit it in.

Also the second one's ending sucks, so I changed it.

Kevosk
08-30-2007, 6:32 PM
Repost for new page.

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2133/depressing1kq7.png

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6325/depressing3sy4.png

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2147/depressing4vy0.png

C00P_88
08-30-2007, 6:54 PM
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t223/C00P_88/Explosm%20Comics/Sterile.jpg


http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t223/C00P_88/Explosm%20Comics/Really.jpg


http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t223/C00P_88/Explosm%20Comics/NotANymore-1.jpg

All Done!!

Stealth Prawn
08-30-2007, 7:04 PM
Done all 3

http://i18.tinypic.com/6c66c9i.jpg Boogie Kid

http://i2.tinypic.com/6fzics0.jpg Pretty Pony

http://i11.tinypic.com/505jrx1.jpg Why God?

Hope you like them.

Kevosk
08-30-2007, 7:09 PM
The first two weren't really too depressing, but god damnit if they didn't make me laugh.

Good job, S_P

Rebecca.
08-30-2007, 7:14 PM
Kevosk

Art: 4.5/5
Depressive-ness: 4/5
Creativity: 2/5
TOTAL: 10.5/15
Your art in the first two is really, really good, but is kind of lacking in the third, which is the only reason I gave you a 4.5 in that section instead of a perfect 5. The comics are also pretty depressing, especially the second one, but they are lacking creativity since you used a father/son relationship for all three.

Stealth

Art: 4/5
Depressive-ness: 2/5
Creativity:5/5
TOTAL: 11/15
I'm not sure why, but I really do like your art. I'm assuming you used Paint, & you did a pretty good job with it for the program being what it is. I agree with Kevosk, I found your comics quite funny instead of depressing, but they were damn creative, I must admit. They are really good comics, & would have done better if this round was supposed to be funny.

Stealth Prawn
08-30-2007, 7:18 PM
Yeah, I kind of like the "Hehehe, classic." line in the second. That idea was given to me by my sister. I asked her for a depressing idea, and she said "how about some little girl finds a pony, but it transforms into Optimus Prime and shoots her?" I didn't really think it was depressing, so I put a twist on it.

EDIT- Were you able to tell it was a tiger?

Far
08-30-2007, 7:44 PM
I'm gonna have to drop out. Lots of stuff decided it was going to rear it's head at the last minute. I'll post the two comics I did finish when I can so you can all be thankful that I did drop out:).

Relaps
08-30-2007, 7:46 PM
I'll post the two comics I did finish when I can so you can all be thankful that I did drop out:).

Because they're awesome, or because they suck?

Lag
08-30-2007, 7:51 PM
~Finished~

Mommy
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/mommy.png

Daddy
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/daddy.png

Jacky Boy
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/jackyboy.png

~Le Fin~

Dodger
08-30-2007, 7:58 PM
Hahaha, Lag's and Relap's have been the best so far. In my opinion

Kevosk
08-30-2007, 7:59 PM
Lag, your last one almost made me cry, holy shit.

Relaps
08-30-2007, 8:00 PM
Lags second one is genius.

Far
08-30-2007, 8:06 PM
Because they're awesome, or because they suck?

Only time will tell.

NVM
08-30-2007, 8:07 PM
2 down, one to go.

Stealth Prawn
08-30-2007, 8:12 PM
Thanks, Becca. Yeah, I did use MS paint. My sister pirated Paint Shop Pro, but I never learned how to use it. And yeah, I wasn't entirely going for depressingness. I was going for funny, in a sad kind-of way. You know, the way that makes you feel bad for laughing at them.

C00P_88
08-30-2007, 8:20 PM
Judges...try do your judging out of 15? One Comic out of 15 and then do an overall score out of 15 like most of you have been.

And Comic makers, only 13 hours left! I should be back from Pippis by then so I should hopefully be able to log on and clean it all up and announce the winner based on the judges scores!

NVM
08-30-2007, 8:34 PM
This is the first time I did serious comics in over a year and the first time using Flash to make em.

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/hobo.png
I made this before Lag posted his comic.

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/kidcar.png
Took about 2 hours to make for some reason.

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/payfor.png

Lissa
08-30-2007, 8:34 PM
Relaps

"School"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 11/15

"Love"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 9/15

"Travel"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 2/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

Total Score: 3.1/5 (9.3/15)

More scores to come..

Rebecca.
08-30-2007, 8:37 PM
So, apparantly, I'm leaving for Denver early in the morning tomorrow, but no one told me this until tonight. Because of this, I'm not going to be able to log on for the next few days, so I have to drop my position as a judge. I'm sorry to do this to you guys but I honestly did not know.

Lag
08-30-2007, 8:38 PM
I made this before Lag posted his(or her) comic.

:indiff:
I have boy parts.

And aren't the scores supposed to be done X/45? Or did I dream that up? Like my masculinity apparently.

NVM
08-30-2007, 8:40 PM
:indiff:

I have boy parts.

I didn't know.

Lissa
08-30-2007, 8:40 PM
Kevosk

"Don't tell mommy."
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5 Suicides...
Total 10/15

"Champ"
Art 5/5 Nice chair. :whale:
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 14/15 HOLY SHIT WTF U BROKE LAWS

"SMACK"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

Total Score: 3.6/5

Soul
08-30-2007, 8:42 PM
In my opinion Lags are the best so far really depressing stuff there.
Though in the second comic you changed the kids shirt color to yellow.


:indiff:
I have boy parts.

And aren't the scores supposed to be done X/45? Or did I dream that up? Like my masculinity apparently.

Ive always though you were a girl for some reason.

Lissa
08-30-2007, 8:48 PM
C00P_88

"Cancer"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

"Hahahahahahahahhahstfu"
Art 2/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5 Shit the guy's expression is priceless.
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

"Pregnant"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 1/5
Total 7/15

Total Score: 2.6/5 (7.8/15)

Well done, coop. :mmyes:

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Lag

"Mommy"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 10/15

"Daddy"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 D:
Creativity 3/5
Total 11/15

"Jacky Boy"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 11/15

Total Score: 3.5/5 (10.5/15)

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NVM

"Spare some change?"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 12/15

"First day (LOLIRONY)"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

"There was"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 Oh god I'm a terrible person.
Creativity 4/5
Total 13/15

Total Score: 3.6/5 (10.8/15)

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StealthPrawn

"Boogie Kid"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 When I first read it, I thought it said Mommy instead of Timmy. That made it really sad. Timmy made it slightly horribly funny.
Creativity 4/5
Total 12/15

"Pretty Pony"
Art 2/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 10/15

"Why God?"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5 I'm talking to someone whose MSN name is "I would Die for my Beliefs Tonight"..
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

Total Score: 3.4/5 (10.3/15)

Relaps
08-30-2007, 9:22 PM
Relaps

Total Score: 3.1/5 (9.3/15)

Harsh.

Lag
08-30-2007, 9:44 PM
Though in the second comic you changed the kids shirt color to yellow.

He pissed himself.....hard.

Ive always though you were a girl for some reason.

I am not! :wail:

TheHipOrangePlatypusSilo
08-30-2007, 10:27 PM
I gave up on this one, I could only come up with one depressing comic.

Savaril
08-31-2007, 12:12 AM
Sorry.

Here they are!

http://i12.tinypic.com/6c3nyh2.png
Guy hangs his self

http://i19.tinypic.com/662v1iu.png
Flames of love. <_< Im probably going to hell for saying that.

http://i7.tinypic.com/67qqp0p.png
Threesome

Urser
08-31-2007, 12:31 AM
I hate this theme. I made myself depressed.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/Depressing1Explosm.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/Depressing3Explosm.png

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/Depressing2Explosm.png

(I hope 1 framers are allowed)

C00P_88
08-31-2007, 5:12 AM
Less than 4 hours left in the competition!!
Anything posted after 12 (other than scores) Will not be accepted!! You have 3 hrs and 50mins!

Good Luck Everyone, check in tomorrow for who will be in the second round!

Second round starts in 15 hrs and 50 mins and you will have 24 hours to produce the 3 comics. 1 with 1 theme, another theme for the next and freestyle for one.

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-31-2007, 5:35 AM
Ooh 2 different themes and a freestyle one sounds good to me.

Lissa
08-31-2007, 12:10 PM
Savaril

"Guy hangs him self"
Art 5/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 10/15

"Flames of love."
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 12/15

"Threesome"
Art 5/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5 WHAT THE HELL SAVARIL
Creativity 3/5
Total 12/15

Total Score: 3.7/5 (11.3/15)

===================================

Urser

"Wump."
Art 5/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 It's twisted.
Creativity 4/5
Total 14/15

"lul cripplz"
Art 5/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 12/15

"Last straw"
Art 5/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 14/15

Total Score: 4.4/5 (13.3/15)

Lissa
08-31-2007, 12:12 PM
Harsh.

:wail: But it's just that you're much too funnay to be depressing! Also this whole averaging system is flawed. Everyone got a worse score than I'd like, but, yeah.

OGM COOP LEWK HERE

UberMegatron - 7.5/15

I Ate Your Pet - 10.2/15

Hats of! 10.2/15

Relaps - 9.3/15 :(

Kevosk - 10.8/15

C00P_88 - 7.8/15

Lag - 10.5/15

NVM - 10.8/15

StealthPrawn 10.3/15

Savaril - 11.3/15

Urser - 13.3/15

Hats of!
08-31-2007, 1:30 PM
I got rather high :) .
10.2/15

Relaps
08-31-2007, 1:31 PM
Where are the other judges? It's just Lissa so far, and Rebecca and Mr. A are out.

Chris310
08-31-2007, 1:38 PM
Mkay, when this competetion ends I call starting the next one. I actually have good topics. >_>

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
08-31-2007, 2:15 PM
Yeah well if you hadn't gotten T-Oed for about a week we could've seen your "good topics" but seen as you were, tough luck. And how do you know yours are better, that's according to you, and there's only been 1 topic in this competition so far.

Chris310
08-31-2007, 4:48 PM
Yeah well if you hadn't gotten T-Oed for about a week we could've seen your "good topics" but seen as you were, tough luck. And how do you know yours are better, that's according to you, and there's only been 1 topic in this competition so far.

Well making 3 comics on the same topic is kind of stupid. Depression is a dumb topic, I've seen great comic-makers put out crappy comics.

NVM
08-31-2007, 5:04 PM
Well making 3 comics on the same topic is kind of stupid. Depression is a dumb topic, I've seen great comic-makers put out crappy comics.

Or since we're low on judges, you can just become one and come up with ideas for the next.

Mirrorman
08-31-2007, 5:05 PM
I think depressing comics is a very good theme. It's actually hard to make an explosm-style depressing comic, that actually IS depressing.

Dodger
08-31-2007, 5:24 PM
If you're low on judges. I'll be one.
Coop, pm me if you make me one.

Urser
08-31-2007, 9:13 PM
Oh, Lissa. You're so biased towards me. :whale:

Aren't we supposed to have all the judging done by now?

Chris310
08-31-2007, 9:24 PM
I think depressing comics is a very good theme. It's actually hard to make an explosm-style depressing comic, that actually IS depressing.

Best comic I can think of is a guy killing himself because he can't think of an idea for a comic.

Lag
08-31-2007, 9:43 PM
Which is why you aren't hosting this anymore.

Johnny
08-31-2007, 10:05 PM
UberMegatron

"Why did she leave me?"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Total 8/15

"I CAN FEEL IT"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 4/5
Total 10/15

"Home sweet home."
Art 2/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

Total: 27/45 (3/5)

Meh, was alright. The last one was the most depressing-est

===========================

I Ate Your Pet

"Hey son.."
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 2/5
Creativity 5/5
Total 10/15

"WHYYYY"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

"We're walking in the air.."
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 5/5
Total 13/15

Total Score: 32/45 (3.5/5)

Extra point for the flames in the last one :lol:

===========================

Hats of!

"SPLATT!"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 2/5 (Lolzworthy but not depressing enough)
Creativity 4/5
Total 10/15

"I'm gonna kill myself."
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 2/5 (Once again, funny but not really depressing)
Creativity 3/5
Total 10/15

"*Peep!*"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 11/15

Total Score: 31/45 (3.4/5)

Didn't really get what the hell was going on in the last one because of the "he he" and "ha ha." Good job.

===========================

Relaps

"School"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:4/5
Creativity:3/5
Total:11/15

"Love"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5
Creativity:3/5
Total:10/15

"Travel"
Art: 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 3/5
Creativity:3/5
Total:10/15

Total Score: 31/45 (3.4/5)

The first one happened to me when I was like 10 :wail:

===========================

Kevosk

"Don't tell mommy"
Art: 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 5/5 Ouch. I liked a lot.
Creativity: 3/5
Total: 12/15

"Proudest Dad"
Art: 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 4/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 12/15

"SMACK!"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 4/5
Creativity: 3/5
Total: 11/15

Total score: 35/45 (3.8/5)

Simply brilliant.

===========================

COOP_88

"Sterile"
Art:3/5 Something just didn't seem right about panels 2,3 and 4
Joke/Depressiveness: 4/5
Creativity:5/5 Wasn't expecting it. Also laughed.
Total: 12/15

"Jack and Cindy"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:4/5
Creativity:3/5
Total: 11/15

"I'm Pregnant"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 3/5
Creativity: 3/5
Total: 10/15

Total Score: 33/45 (3.6/5)

Loved number 1

===========================

Stealth Prawn

"Boogie Kid"
Art:3/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5 Woulda been a hell of a lot more depressing with just the first 3.5 panels
Creativity:4/5
Total: 10/15

"Pony"
Art:3/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 2/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 9/15

"Why God?"
Art:3/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 3/5
Creativity:3/5
Total: 9/15

Total score: 28/45 (3.1/5)

Alright overall. To be honest, the 2nd one wasn't depressing or funny.

===========================

Lag

"Mommy"
Art: 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 4/5
Creativity: 4/5
Total:11/15

"Daddy
Art: 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness: 4/5 Funny :lol:
Creativity: 5/5
Total: 12/15

"Jacky Boy"
Art:4/5 Looks much better than the other 2 for some reason.
Joke/Depressiveness: 5/5
Creativity: 4/5
Total: 13/15

Total score: 36/45 (4/5)

Last one was brilliant.

===========================

NVM

"Homeless guy"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:4/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 12/15

"School"
Art:4/5 Liked the last panel
Joke/Depressiveness:4/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 12/15

"Insurance"
Art:3/5
Joke/Depressiveness:2/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 9/15

Total score: 33/45 (3.6/5)

Would've been very good if it wasn't for the last comic.

===========================

Savaril

"Guy hangs himself"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:4/5 Very nice.
Creativity:3/5
Total: 11/15

"Flames of Love'
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5
Creativity:4/5
Total:11/15

"Threesome"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 11/15

Total score: 33/45 (3.6/5)

Very well done for all of them.

===========================

ursername180

"Little Girl jumps"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:2/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 10/15

"Cripple"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 11/15

"Little Arsehole"
Art:4/5
Joke/Depressiveness:3/5
Creativity:4/5
Total: 11/15

Total score: 32/45 (3.5/5)

None of them were depressing but they did make me laugh a bit

===========================

Lag
08-31-2007, 10:36 PM
By the by, User, did the girl fall or jump in the first comic?

Urser
08-31-2007, 11:06 PM
By the by, User, did the girl fall or jump in the first comic?

Umm... it was intended for her to fall. But whatever floats your boat. :)

Enslave
08-31-2007, 11:19 PM
I just thought I'd say that I found Relaps' comics to be very depressing (except for the third, seemed too obvious), and thought personally they should have been rated higher. I felt this way for the first two because these two things happen a lot in life, and are horrible things. Especially the second one, i actually felt a little heartbroken by that one :frown:

Other ones that were especially depressing too were:
Sav's flames of love one. That was horrible, so good job on that.
Lag's kid getting hit with the beer bottle one.
And Kevosk's proud father one, that was probably the most depressing of any comic here.

Relaps
09-01-2007, 12:30 AM
I just thought I'd say that I found Relaps' comics to be very depressing (except for the third, seemed too obvious), and thought personally they should have been rated higher. I felt this way for the first two because these two things happen a lot in life, and are horrible things. Especially the second one, i actually felt a little heartbroken by that one :frown:

Thanks. I thought the third was a little "Ehh" myself, but I needed a third and it just popped in.

Hats of!
09-01-2007, 2:05 AM
Didn't really get what the hell was going on in the last one because of the "he he" and "ha ha." Good job.

HE WAS GOING INSANE!
:evillaugh

C00P_88
09-01-2007, 2:26 AM
Sorry Guys, just got back!!

We'll need three new judges for the next round

The 8 people are yet to be announced and since Lissa and Uber are the only ones whos scores are in, im going on them..

8 People will be posted asap!

UberMegatron – 9/15
I Ate Your Pet – 10.5/15
Hats of! – 10.2/15
Relaps – 10.2/15
Kevosk – 11.2/15
COOP_88 – 10.8/15
Stealth Prawn – 9.3/15
Lag – 12/15
NVM – 10.8/15
Savaril – 10.8/15
ursername180 – 10.5/15
---------------------------------
UberMegatron - 7.5/15
I Ate Your Pet - 10.2/15
Hats of! 10.2/15
Relaps - 9.3/15
Kevosk - 10.8/15
C00P_88 - 7.8/15
Lag - 10.5/15
NVM - 10.8/15
StealthPrawn 10.3/15
Savaril - 11.3/15
Urser - 13.3/15
--------------------------------
1st – ursername180 – 23.8/30
2nd – Lag – 22.5/30
3rd – Savaril – 22.1/30
4th – Kevosk – 22/30
5th - NVM – 21.6/30
6th - I Ate Your Pet – 20.7/30
7th - Hats of! – 20.4/30
8th - Stealth Prawn – 19.6/30
------------------
9th - Relaps – 19.5/30
10th - COOP_88 – 18.6/30
11th - UberMegatron – 16.5/30

Ok, so Gryphon and DAD if you still wanna judge let me know before the next competition starts in 6 hours and 15 minutes.

Relaps, Myself and Uber are out as comic makers and judges we need TWO themes.

Next contest has 8 people which will be knocked down to 4 depending on judges scores, Good Luck guys!

Also I'd like to keep in the comp so can I be a judge? Just dont want any objections, If there are I dont have to be...

Gryphon
09-01-2007, 2:42 AM
I'll judge

Hats of!
09-01-2007, 3:04 AM
Themes for next round?

Relaps
09-01-2007, 3:45 AM
Oh well, win some lose some.

Made a last depressing comic for no reason.



http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5833/failia0.jpg


Congrats to the Top 8, good luck on following rounds.

C00P_88
09-01-2007, 3:49 AM
Judges will give us the themes...I reckon Lissa gives one and Johnny gives one and the third is freestyle.

Lissa and Johnny post em whenever, comp starts Now i guess and ends 24 hours after we get both themes. Gives you just over a day to submit your comics, good luck everyone!

Johnny
09-01-2007, 4:15 AM
Theme is: *drumroll* RANDOMNESS!

The random-er, the better.

Relaps
09-01-2007, 4:29 AM
So wait, who are judges now?

If there's a space I'll snag it.

Gryphon
09-01-2007, 8:26 AM
I said I'd judge so I'm just confirming that for you Coop.

C00P_88
09-01-2007, 9:30 AM
Ok, we'll have Lissa, JohnnyJohnson, Gryphon, DAD, Relaps and Me as judges, should give a good score with different opinions and such!

And cos Im online and we need another theme we'll make it...Men in Uniform so you need some person in some kind of uniform as your main character.

So the themes are Uniform and randomness and one freestyle comic, go!!

PrettyHasItsPrice
09-01-2007, 10:52 AM
Awww relaps is the best at random comics.
That one where the guy busts into the house and starts raping that kid.
And the one where the guy shoots the kid and starts raping him.
I lol'ed so hard at those.
You should let him compete.
Its his forte =/

C00P_88
09-01-2007, 11:13 AM
Its a competition and he was kicked out. I suck at depressing comics and think i would do better in this round but fair is fair. He can be in the next competition.

PrettyHasItsPrice
09-01-2007, 11:17 AM
Okay.
I just love his random comics.
Can't wait for the next competition.
I loved all the comics here.
Good work Coop.

NVM
09-01-2007, 12:31 PM
Sweet, this is the first time I made it to Round 2 of anything on Explosm.

Hats of!
09-01-2007, 1:06 PM
Uniform... Does doctors robes count?

Lag
09-01-2007, 1:45 PM
I'd assume uniform means police, paramedic (doctor) fireman, etc. So yes?

P0K3M0N_MA5T3R
09-01-2007, 2:24 PM
Sorry guys but I'm gonna have to drop out, I have this charity football game tommorow and a meal at night, plus my dog had to be put to sleep today so I'm not really in the mood for doing much. Relaps can have my place if he wants it.

Relaps
09-01-2007, 3:17 PM
Awww relaps is the best at random comics.
That one where the guy busts into the house and starts raping that kid.
And the one where the guy shoots the kid and starts raping him.
I lol'ed so hard at those.
You should let him compete.
Its his forte =/

It's not like I wont be making them still, they'll be in Fanart.

PrettyHasItsPrice
09-01-2007, 3:51 PM
I hope.
You're the best fan art creator I've seen on here.

Relaps
09-01-2007, 3:53 PM
Relaps can have my place if he wants it.

Um.

C00p? Wildcard?

Lag
09-01-2007, 4:01 PM
Psht, you'd better listen to Relaps now, he's got sammich powers.

Oh yea, Wacky craziness ahead.

Man in Uniform
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/village.png
M. Night Shyamalan's "The Village People"

Randomness
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/imatumor.png
Shutup!

Freestyle (This wasn't about swimming, right?)
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l149/Poshnak/libary.png
...Book judges you!

~Fin~

Penis_Captivus
09-01-2007, 4:03 PM
The second one is the most random I would say. All good, though.

Killer Carebear
09-01-2007, 4:10 PM
I personally like the third one.
A lot.

Dodger
09-01-2007, 4:37 PM
Oh my god, my first time as judge. I'm so nervous.
Lag

1st
Joke - 3/5 I chuckled
Art - 3/5 The people could've been drawn better, but it wasn't horrible
Creativity/Predictability - 4/5
total- 10/15

2nd
Joke- 2/5 I didn't laugh at all, but it was pretty random.
Art- 2/5 The first guy's eyes look weird in the first three frames.
Creatvity/ Predictbility- 3/5
total- 7/15

[b]3rd[b]
Joke- 4/5 I laughed a bit.
Art- 3/5 Art was fine, nothing great, nothing horrible.
Creativity/ Predictability- 4/5
total-11/15

Overall Total- 28/45= 3.5/5

Relaps
09-01-2007, 5:17 PM
Lag

Village People
Joke - 2/5 Kinda eh.
Art - 5/5 Good backgrounds!
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Random
Joke - 3/5 LOL WUT
Art - 2/5 White walls be white.
Creativity - 4/5 Second heads are cool
Total - 9/15

Library
Joke - 3/5 Chuckles
Art - 3/5 Good stuff.
Creativity - 4/5 Not seen often
Total - 10/15

Overall - 29/45

Johnny
09-01-2007, 6:49 PM
Lag

Uniform
Joke - 3/5 ......Alright I guess
Art - 4/5 Very nice.
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 11/15

Random
Joke/Randomness - 4/5 Coulda been randomer but still pretty random.
Art - 4/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 12/15

Freestyle
Joke - 3/5 Got me a laff and a half :lol:
Art - 3/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 10/15

Total score: 33/45 (3.6/5)

Good job.

Lag
09-01-2007, 6:57 PM
Am I the only one still in this "competition"? :king:

Relaps
09-01-2007, 6:59 PM
Still have 16 hours.

Lag
09-01-2007, 7:02 PM
Really? Thought it was much less than that. Than again, I didn't really know when the second round started anyways.

Gryphon
09-01-2007, 8:00 PM
Lag

The Village Parody
Joke - 2/5
Art - 5/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Randomness
Joke - 4/5
Art - 2/5
Creativity - 5/5
Total - 11/15

Gay book
Joke - 2/5
Art - 4/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 9/15

Overall - 30/45

Lissa
09-01-2007, 8:21 PM
Lag

"Uniform"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 4/5 It's rather hard not to be.
Total 10/15

"Randomness"
Art 4/5
Joke/Depressiveness 5/5 AHEAHAHAHEWUT
Creativity 4/5
Total 13/15

"Freestyle"
Art 3/5
Joke/Depressiveness 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Total 9/15

Total Score: 10.6/15


And relaps, that last comic made me :wail:.

Kevosk
09-01-2007, 10:11 PM
Hey guys, just so you know, this is where my comic is going to go (in this spot).

I just wanted to make sure I had one kinda high up on the page. I'll post the toons in here in a few hours.

HEAR WE GO

"Uniform"
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/55/round2fo4.png

"Random"
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6672/petaltothemedalmw4.png

"Freestyle"
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6729/scruffyhn7.png

NVM
09-01-2007, 11:59 PM
Took less time than I thought.

RandoWorld:
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/world.png

MEN IN BLAK:
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/presidnet.png

FREESTYLIN YO:
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z216/NvM321/jesus.png


All I'm saying is that I originally read "Men in Uniform" as Men in black and that i could never draw Grim reapers.

Hats of!
09-02-2007, 2:12 AM
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/149/freestylein5.png
Freestyle

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5074/randomzt7.png
Random

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1395/uniformod9.png
Uniform

Relaps
09-02-2007, 2:21 AM
NVM

Random
Art - 2/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Blak
Art - 3/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 9/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 2/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Overall - 25/45

Work on the art Bud, seems a bit slapdansh to me.
_____________________________

Hats Off!

Freestyle
Art - 4/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 5/5 Good work.
Total - 13/15

Random
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 11/15

Uniform
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Overall - 34/45

Verreh nice job.
___________________________
Kevosk

Uniform
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 5/5 Nice one.
Total - 12/15

Random
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 2/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Overall 30/45

Nice.
________________
Urser

Uniform
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Random
Art - 4/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 12/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5 (urseeeer :argh: )
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 11/15

Overall - 32/45

Kevosk
09-02-2007, 2:30 AM
Got it fixed.

Cheesymaroon
09-02-2007, 2:43 AM
Kevosk I can't remember where, but I've seen your new freestyle comic pretty much word for word somewhere else.

Kevosk
09-02-2007, 2:53 AM
Kevosk I can't remember where, but I've seen your new freestyle comic pretty much word for word somewhere else.

http://people.uncw.edu/smithms/ace%20potpouri/oD-single/oD-062.jpg

I changed it around a little but it's the same premise.

Hats of!
09-02-2007, 2:58 AM
AND THAT'S STEALING! :O

BartS
09-02-2007, 6:37 AM
[jokebook]

I changed it around a little but it's the same premise.

It's a rather common joke in Holland :goofy:

C00P_88
09-02-2007, 7:54 AM
Theres one hour left and only 4 people have posted comics...that means if we get no more posted, those 4 are automatically moving on....

Urser
09-02-2007, 8:12 AM
I wasn't going to do it, but then I had a vision... of me winning.

Uniform:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/UniformExplosm.png

Random:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/BackwardsTalkExplosm.png

Freestyle:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/ursername180/TableBreakageExplosm.png

Hats of!
09-02-2007, 8:56 AM
Urser good job. I don't like quiters.

C00P_88
09-02-2007, 9:07 AM
Round Over, Judges we need scores. Post or repost after this post and I will tally up and post scores and info for next round asap

C00P_88
09-02-2007, 9:51 AM
My Judging

Lag
"Village People"
Joke:- 3.5/5
Creativity:- 5/5
Art:- 3/5
Overall: - 11.5/15

"Randomness"
Joke:- 3/5
Creativity:- 2.5/5
Art:- 3/5
Overall: - 8.5/15

"Freestyle"
Joke:- 3/5
Creativity:- 4/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 11/15

OVERALL - 31/45 = 10.3/15

Good Job Lag!

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Kevosk
"Uniform"
Joke:- 3.5/5
Creativity:- 4/5
Art:- 3/5
Overall: - 10.5/15

"Random"
Joke:- 3/5
Creativity:- 4/5
Art:- 3/5
Overall: - 10/15

"Freestyle"
Joke:- 2/5
Creativity:- 0/5
Art:- 3.5/5
Overall: - 5.5/15

OVERALL - 26/45 = 8.6/15

If you didnt steal that last joke it wouldve been a better score
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NVM
"Randoworld"
Joke:- 3/5
Creativity:- 3/5
Art:- 2.5/5
Overall: - 8/15

"Men in Black"
Joke:- 4/5
Creativity:- 4/5
Art:- 2.5/5
Overall: - 10.5/15

"Freestylin Yo"
Joke:- 3.5/5
Creativity:- 4.5/5
Art:- 2.5/5
Overall: - 10.5/15

OVERALL - 29/45 = 9.6/15
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Hats Of
"Freestyle"
Joke:- 4/5
Creativity:- 4.5/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 12.5/15

"Randomness"
Joke:- 3/5
Creativity:- 4/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 11/15

"Uniform"
Joke:- 4/5
Creativity:- 4.5/5
Art:- 5/5
Overall: - 13.5/15

OVERALL - 37/45 = 12.3/15
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Urser
"Uniform"
Joke:- 4/5
Creativity:- 5/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 13/15

"Randomness"
Joke:- 5/5
Creativity:- 5/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 14/15

"Freestyle"
Joke:- 3.5/5
Creativity:- 5/5
Art:- 4/5
Overall: - 12.5/15

OVERALL - 39.5/45 = 13.1/15


Good Job All, Other judges we need scores...Lissa, Johnny, DAD, Gryphon and Relaps, Post/Repost now

Kevosk
09-02-2007, 11:25 AM
Wait, I'm not getting you. How was that stealing? I gave credit to whoever came up with it, even though my joke was a variant on it and therefore not the same joke.

Oh also I'm a bit baffled as to how Urser is getting good points on his cartoons.

Lag
09-02-2007, 12:17 PM
For one he didn't steal his jokes. :lol:

Dodger
09-02-2007, 1:30 PM
Kevosk
1st
Joke-4/5
Art-3/5
Creativity-3/5
total-10/15
2nd
joke- 2/5
art-3/5
creativity-3/5
total-8/15
3rd
joke-3/5
art-3/5
creativity-3/5
total-9/15

Overall-27/45

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NVM
1st
Joke- 4/5
Art-3/5
Creativity-3/5
total-10/15
2nd
joke-2/5
art-3/5
creativity-2/5
total-7/15
3rd
joke- 3/5
art-2/5
creativity- 3/5
total-8/15

Overall-25/45
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Hats Off
1st
Joke-3/5 would've been funnier without the last two panels
Art-4/5
Creativity-4/5
total-11/15
2nd
joke- 4/5
art- 4/5
creativity- 4/5
total-12/15
3rd
joke- 2/5 really drawn out, and not very funny
art-4/5
creativity- 2/5 doctor jokes have been done to death
total-8/15

Overall-31/45
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Urser
1st
Joke- 3/5
Art-5/5
Creativity-3/5
total-12/15
2nd
joke- 3/5
art-5/5
creativity-3/5
total-11/15
3rd
joke-5/5 haha that was funny
art-5/5
creativity-2/5
total-12/15

Overall-35/45

Relaps
09-02-2007, 2:04 PM
Repost of scores:

NVM

Random
Art - 2/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Blak
Art - 3/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 9/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 2/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Overall - 25/45

Work on the art Bud, seems a bit slapdansh to me.
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Hats Off!

Freestyle
Art - 4/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 5/5 Good work.
Total - 13/15

Random
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 11/15

Uniform
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Overall - 34/45

Verreh nice job.
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Kevosk

Uniform
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 5/5 Nice one.
Total - 12/15

Random
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 2/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 8/15

Overall 30/45

Nice.
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Urser

Uniform
Art - 4/5
Joke - 3/5
Creativity - 3/5
Total - 10/15

Random
Art - 4/5
Joke - 4/5
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 12/15

Freestyle
Art - 3/5
Joke - 4/5 (urseeeer :argh: )
Creativity - 4/5
Total - 11/15

Overall - 32/45

Hats of!
09-02-2007, 2:49 PM
Relaps, I love you :) .

C00P_88
09-02-2007, 10:26 PM
Judging
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Relaps


Lag
Overall - 29/45
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NVM
Overall - 25/45
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Hats Off!
Overall - 34/45
___________________________
Kevosk
Overall 30/45
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Urser
Overall - 32/45 Relaps


DAD

Lag
Overall Total- 28/45= 3.5/5
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Kevosk
Overall-27/45
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NVM
Overall-25/45
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Hats Off
Overall-31/45
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Urser
Overall-35/45


Me
Lag
OVERALL - 31/45 = 10.3/15
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Kevosk
OVERALL - 26/45 = 8.6/15
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NVM
OVERALL - 29/45 = 9.6/15
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Hats Of
OVERALL - 37/45 = 12.3/15
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Urser
OVERALL - 39.5/45 = 13.1/15


Gryphon

Lag
Overall - 30/45
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Kevosk
Overall-23/45
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NVM
Overall-20/45
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Hats Off
Overall-33/45
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Urser
Overall-37/45
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Lag
09-02-2007, 11:25 PM
What happened to the other 3 competeers?
Also, Johnny, Lissa, and the other absent judges missed the rest of the comics.

It's anarchy in here.

C00P_88
09-02-2007, 11:56 PM
Some just didnt make comics, like in the first round but thats why we set a time limit..Only one person will be knocked out and to do that im waiting on scores from the other 3 judges. Just about to pm them to remind them.

Kevosk
09-02-2007, 11:59 PM
Why not go as is? The judging's been done, the comics are done.

C00P_88
09-03-2007, 12:05 AM
Cos the other three judges havent told me that they cant judge...so ill give em a bit more time cos we all know they're good judges aswell

Killer Carebear
09-03-2007, 7:29 AM
I can judge if you need me to.

EDIT:
Well actually, not anymore.

Gryphon
09-03-2007, 11:19 AM
SORRY! My bad, I was gone for the weekend. I'll be posting my scores on this post in a couple minutes.

Kevosk

1st
Joke-3/5
Art-3/5
Creativity-3/5
total-9/15

2nd
joke- 2/5
art-3/5
creativity-3/5
total-8/15

3rd
joke-1/5
art-3/5
creativity-1/5
total-5/15

Overall-23/45

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NVM

1st
Joke- 2/5 where is the joke
Art-2/5
Creativity-2/5
total-6/15

2nd
joke-2/5 what the hell?
art-2/5
creativity-1/5 a 'worth' with you?
total-5/15

3rd
joke- 3/5
art-3/5
creativity- 3/5
total-9/15

Overall-20/45
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Hats Off

1st
Joke-2/5
Art-4/5
Creativity-4/5
total-10/15

2nd
joke- 5/5
art- 4/5
creativity- 4/5
total-13/15

3rd
joke- 3/5
art-4/5
creativity- 3/5
total-10/15

Overall-33/45
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Urser

1st
Joke- 4/5
Art-5/5
Creativity-4/5
total-13/15

2nd
joke- 4/5
art-4/5
creativity-4/5
total-12/15

3rd
joke-4/5
art-4/5
creativity-4/5
total-12/15

Overall-37/45

Kevosk
09-03-2007, 8:37 PM
I really don't understand why everyone's giving Ursername180 perfect art marks :\/

Lag
09-03-2007, 9:39 PM
He uses the radial color tool.

Stealth Prawn
09-03-2007, 9:56 PM
Oh shit. I was out of town for the past few days, I guess I missed out on this.

W/e, I'm glad I beat Coop and Relaps.

DJArchngl
09-03-2007, 10:44 PM
I really don't understand why everyone's giving Ursername180 perfect art marks :\/

Um... Cause it looks better than everything else posted?

Just a guess.

I could be wrong tho.




(I'm not.)

C00P_88
09-04-2007, 6:08 AM
Urser
Overall - 32/45
Overall-35/45
OVERALL - 39.5/45
Overall-37/45

Overall - 12/15
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Hats Of
Overall-33/45
OVERALL - 37/45
Overall-31/45
Overall-34/45

Overall - 11.5/15
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Lag
Overall - 29/45
Overall Total- 28/45
OVERALL - 31/45
Overall - 30/45

Overall - 9.8/15
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Kevosk
Overall-23/45
Overall 30/45
OVERALL - 26/45
Overall-27/45

Overall - 8.8/15
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NVM
Overall - 25/45
OVERALL - 29/45
Overall-25/45
Overall-20/45

Overall - 8.5/15
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And I cant keep looking after this thread so If you want the rounds to continue someone needs to take over or we can declare Urser the winner and another competition can start...Ill close it in a day if no-one takes over

Urser
09-04-2007, 6:10 AM
I vote for the second option.

Johnny
09-04-2007, 6:32 AM
Kevosk

Uniform
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 11/15

Random
Joke/Randomness: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 11/15

Freestyle
Joke: 1/5
Creativity: 1/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 6/15

Total score: 27/45 (9/15)


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NVM

"Randoworld"
Joke/Randomness: 4/5
Creativity: 3/5
Art: 3/5
Overall: 10/15

"Men in Black"
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 3/5
Overall: 10/15

"Freestylin Yo"
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 3/5
Art: 3/5
Overall: 9/15

Final Score - 29/45 (9.6/15)
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Hats Of

Freestyle
Joke: 4/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 12/15

Random
Joke/Randomness: 4/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 12/15

Uniform
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 5/5
Overall: 12/15

Total score 37/45 (12.3/15)
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ursername180

Uniform
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 11/15

Random
Joke/Randomness: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: 14/15

Freestyle
Joke: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Art: 4/5
Overall: - 11/15

Total score 36/45 = 12/15

C00P_88
09-04-2007, 6:47 AM
too late johnny! Im not redoing it..you can if ya want? Im sick of math :(

Hats of!
09-04-2007, 10:07 AM
Yeah! Johnnys gotta count! Then I get higher score :D .

C00P_88
09-04-2007, 10:12 AM
you work it out then hats...im not lol, i hate math so much!

Lissa
09-04-2007, 3:29 PM
Sorry, I've been off Explosm for a while. Is there going to be a new one?

Chris310
09-04-2007, 4:04 PM
Congratulations to Urser on winning.
COOP, I've started the next one if you don't mind.

Killer Carebear
09-04-2007, 4:28 PM
I'm pretty sure that was only the second round, but I signed up anyway.

C00P_88
09-05-2007, 7:40 AM
URSER WINS!!!