PDA

View Full Version : Round 1-Pelican Man VS AnnieMae


Far
07-05-2008, 2:50 AM
Go!

Pelican Man
07-05-2008, 3:23 AM
You're joking me. You so planned this Far!

Arghf. Well, I'd like to go second, if that's cool witchoo Annie.

I Lick Vaginas
07-05-2008, 3:37 AM
Looking forward to this round :0

Johnny
07-05-2008, 6:51 AM
Ha, the easiest to draw verses the hardest to draw. Looking forward to it.

AnnieMae
07-05-2008, 4:19 PM
Alright, this works for me! I reckon the 2-day initiative shall commence on the 6th of July, so expect the first 'lick Monday afternoon.



Pelican Man....July 7th...."jew" gonna get it.....I'm gonna get "jew" good...I'm gonna get "jew" so good, you're gonna be exclaiming, "OH NO JEW DID'AINT!"


.....I apologize for my lame jewish puns; I talk a big game, but i'm kosher as hell.

Relaps
07-05-2008, 4:21 PM
Don't wait till the last minute Annie.

AnnieMae
07-05-2008, 4:33 PM
I'm not, that's actually the next time i'll be in front of my scanner; I'm visiting family for the 4th of July weekend. The comic will probably be done by tomorrow, but you won't see it till i'm back at homebase on Monday :-)

edit: If Peli doesn't mind the wait, that is. Otherwise, ATTACK AWAY!

Pelican Man
07-05-2008, 8:47 PM
Oh god, the puns, THE PUNS!

I should probably start practicing drawing your character or something.

And yeah, I'm happy to wait. Good luck sir/ma'am.

Mr. Crow
07-05-2008, 10:52 PM
Shoulda been around for the last tournament, Annie. It was Jewish night at the community center.

Far
07-06-2008, 2:03 AM
Just to clarifiy you only have about a day and 46 minutes for the first attack.

AnnieMae
07-06-2008, 10:24 AM
Alright Alright, i'm coming....REED!


http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/DreddZed.png

NOW, U-Go! http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/care.gif

Pieman
07-06-2008, 10:36 AM
Arts great, its hilarious but... What the fuck is going on?

Mustache
07-06-2008, 11:01 AM
Arts great, its hilarious but... What the fuck is going on?

I agree 100 percent.. What the hell??

Dodger
07-06-2008, 11:03 AM
Haha I liked it. Never saw the sesame street thing coming.
Clever and funny.

reyley1014
07-06-2008, 11:45 AM
that was awesome!!
"call the cunt so i can choke his cock" -teehee

Iceshade
07-06-2008, 1:00 PM
That was really weird, and I didn't find it too funny to be honest. I want to see how Zed will respond.

Guerrilla705
07-06-2008, 3:06 PM
I'm nto jewish but aren't there supposed ot be 8 candles on the manora? Yid kid only has 7, and where does his jewishness fit into any of this?

Lag
07-06-2008, 3:12 PM
No, it's 7 candles.
And 9.

Matterialize
07-06-2008, 3:49 PM
Professional artwork, but where's the funny?

JW
07-06-2008, 5:47 PM
"You're in Elmo's world now, Bitch!"

Right there.

MrDoctor
07-06-2008, 5:59 PM
Yea the art was awesome, but seriously not one joke?

JW
07-06-2008, 6:03 PM
Yea the art was awesome, but seriously not one joke?

"You're in Elmo's world now, Bitch!"

Right there.

Ahem.

Arielcz
07-06-2008, 6:11 PM
I found it funny, especially because of the Sesame Street reference, it was very original and witty.

MistyTehMoose
07-06-2008, 6:26 PM
I found this with Anniemae when she posted last time, her comics may look good so it fools you into thinking the whole comic is good. It was hard to follow and I didn't even smile...

I Lick Vaginas
07-06-2008, 6:41 PM
I thought it was quite funny. Unlike most of the comics here, AnnieMae's was less setting up to a punchline and more consistent one liners throughout.

It's okay AnnieMae, I understand you. :)

Pelican Man
07-06-2008, 10:33 PM
My comic be on it's way, yarrgh.

Here ye go, vile beasts. (http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/354/annieaali2.png)

Iceshade
07-06-2008, 11:01 PM
Wow, I'm speechless.

Pelican Man
07-06-2008, 11:11 PM
Uh, thanks? Seeing as how this is my first comix evrar, could I get more helpful criticism than that, prees?

jewishjosh
07-06-2008, 11:40 PM
The art is so terrible that no amount of humour or creativity could help you win. (Not that past-tense AOLisms are very creative.) Colour it a bit, add some detail. Even if there's no scenery jokes at least it's more pleasant to look at.

This is exactly why I don't enter these tournaments. :lol:

Inseln
07-06-2008, 11:48 PM
Oh my god. That was hilarious. I was laughing so hard!

This'll be a tough one, I liked Annie's sesame street stuff, and your "lamp'd" atleast equals it!

Pelican Man
07-07-2008, 12:40 AM
...Wow. My art is pretty bad, huh?

Iceshade
07-07-2008, 12:42 AM
Yeah I'd say either take more time and add detail or color it in. I mean that would bring it up in my opinion.

Pelican Man
07-07-2008, 1:05 AM
Upcoming in the next comic by me; colour + more time spent.

Far
07-07-2008, 1:45 AM
I thought it was fucking clever, how you turned the letters in lamp into a lamp, and than proceded to thwack him with it.

InTransit
07-07-2008, 1:50 AM
I thought Peliman's art was fine. You can tell what everything is, and the drawings are smooth and well done. So what if it's not professional and coloured in with amazing scenic backgrounds. His character is a letter with alphabet minions, so you can't expect too much. So far, I prefer Peli's. Even though AnnieMae's art is amazing, it wasn't funny.

Chips
07-07-2008, 2:18 AM
I laughed more at Peli's. Lamp, genius. Saying that though, I do reccomend when it's your turn again, take some time to make the art a little more pleasing. Though you did a good job dude.

Guerrilla705
07-07-2008, 12:42 PM
Hilarious! You have my vote all the way Pelican Man!

HappyPalooza
07-07-2008, 12:44 PM
So far, Peli's got it for me. Waiting to see what Annie has next.

Raxo
07-07-2008, 1:08 PM
Pelican- Despite the horrendous art it was pretty funny and I actually want to see more of it. Maybe you'll even improve as the tourney goes on.

AnnieMae
07-07-2008, 5:42 PM
HA! Good counter, Peli. But I can't go out like some religious candelabra....if you guys want jokes and pain, i'll give you jokes and pain. I'll try not to let my penchant for non-for-profit educational children programs get in the way.


Notice, i said try

Stay tuned, true believers!

Pelican Man
07-07-2008, 9:34 PM
Annie, is your character male or female?

Lissa
07-07-2008, 9:52 PM
We were wondering about that last year. I don't think we ever figured it out.

Pelican Man
07-08-2008, 2:30 AM
Well I demand an answer! It's been bugging me, dammit.

HappyPalooza
07-08-2008, 8:15 AM
I just say, "it."

Dodger
07-08-2008, 2:14 PM
I think anniemae said it was male, even though everyone thought it was female because of the curls.

MistyTehMoose
07-08-2008, 4:03 PM
How long does she have to make the next one?

Dodger
07-08-2008, 4:22 PM
A day and 4 hours by my watch.

Far
07-08-2008, 5:07 PM
Uh no, about 5 and a half hours.

AnnieMae
07-08-2008, 6:19 PM
alright, alright. just sit tight and grab yourself some popcorn.

BAM!:

ED!T: links for non-scrollers.



http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/ledzed01.png

http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/ledzed2copy.png

http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/poopdcopy.png


http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/ledzed01.png
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/ledzed2copy.png













http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o264/anniemaetion/poopdcopy.png

jewishjosh
07-08-2008, 6:27 PM
Oy gevalt. The Sesame Street references are killing me. You're doing a great job using Zed's powers against, well, yourself. Very creative.

Prawnatron
07-08-2008, 6:28 PM
I'm sorry I don't understand any of this.

tunacake
07-08-2008, 7:00 PM
I didn't even make it to the third one. I'm sure it's funny and all but everything is all jumbled together and I can't tell what the fuck is going on.

AnnieMae is going for the whole "Stuff as much as stuff you can into one comic" thing, and Pelican Man is going for the "Nice and simple, no clutter at all" thing. Two extremes, and Pelican Man is winning for sure.

jewishjosh
07-08-2008, 7:05 PM
You're right, there's too much going on, but if you read it all it makes sense.

HappyPalooza
07-08-2008, 7:30 PM
Wonderful, humor was stepped up and Zed's powers were used well with the whole Clamp thing, and you already know that the art's great. But I agree that it was a bit cluttered and I had to read it all before getting a full understanding of each part.

AnnieMae
07-08-2008, 8:38 PM
My bad if you're kinda thrown off by this particular format. I had too many ideas coming to me at once...but can you really have too many ideas? I had to justify the whole Sesame Street angle. did I blow too much of my load?

But did I not make good on my promise of jokes and pain? JOKES and PAIN?

Clix
07-08-2008, 8:40 PM
Honestly, it makes me not want to read it. I like your drawing style though.

Relaps
07-08-2008, 8:52 PM
Using tits as a phrase weapon. Nice touch.

Far
07-08-2008, 8:55 PM
It's good if you read it but it's still hard as fuck to follow.

davidmanman
07-08-2008, 11:48 PM
I really enjoyed it, though it was pretty hard to follow.

Tweek
07-08-2008, 11:57 PM
Wasn't that hard for me. I loved it man.

CheesePlease
07-08-2008, 11:58 PM
Annie that was amazing. One of the only comics so far in the tournament that made me laugh out loud.

It isn't that hard to follow either. =\

Shmuh
07-09-2008, 12:01 AM
I think you should number your panels or some shit.

Also OOOOOOH, he's not a she after all. Good job.

Inseln
07-09-2008, 12:29 AM
I nearly killed myself laughing on this one. That was a great job. I had no problem following or understanding any of it.

Pelican Man
07-09-2008, 5:40 AM
Well butts. Looks like I'm going to have to pull out the big guns for this one. Could someone give me an estimate as to how much time I have left? I've been a bit busy getting my drink on.

Annie, I thought your comic was pretty awesome. Despite the fact that "tits" has 2 't's, and the words didn't form the objects, you've got me stumped. This comeback is gunna be a toughie.

Edit: by my calculations, I have the better half of 2 days still to go. Prepare for a long wait, bitches.

reyley1014
07-09-2008, 7:23 AM
I thought this was hillarious!
The art style and the humor are totally different then everyone else in the tourniment, in a very good way.
Yay for originality and creativity!

I didnt find it hard to follow at all, but the handwriting is a bit small, so it was hard to read at parts.

Mustache
07-09-2008, 10:18 AM
I found a little hard to follow. but it was quite funny

Pelican Man
07-10-2008, 12:08 AM
Hold onto your handlebars, kiddies. I'm well into the final stages of making this comic, it should be up within the hour.

Page 1 (http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/4778/anniebbpg1ip2.png)
Page 2 (http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9025/anniebbpg2qe6.png)
Page 3 (http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7701/anniebbpg3rw5.png)

NVM
07-10-2008, 1:49 AM
That's some pretty epic stuff.
The art's not that good but it kinda fits with the whole words thing.

Chips
07-10-2008, 1:59 AM
Haha, much better. I see you put a lot more effort into the art. I liked that one, I was a little hesitant to click the last comic considering I was expecting something shocking. But I liked that ending, good job.

McGruff
07-10-2008, 2:00 AM
Oh peli, that was awesome
Part 1: I loved the "welcome to the ice age bitch" bit
Part 2: The coins were classic and the holocaust part made the whole thing. I did have a little trouble on your handwriting, but not much.
Part 3: Thats exactly why I love you, the rock band thing was pure awesome. Sadly, I didn't get the shake thing, but thats probably just me.

Overall, the references and little attacks won me over

InTransit
07-10-2008, 2:06 AM
Peliman, that was awesome. I love how you put different twists in it and the rockband ending was a brilliant idea, because everyone knows if you succeed at rockband, you succeed in life.

Pelican Man
07-10-2008, 2:08 AM
Sadly, I didn't get the shake thing, but thats probably just me.

It was a handshake :(

McGruff
07-10-2008, 2:50 AM
OH! It makes sense now. Now that I get that ending it kind of made it better for me, good job Peli. I don't know how shes going to get out of this nutshell.

Far
07-10-2008, 2:51 AM
He's not, that was the last comic.

Voting goes here: http://forums.explosm.net/showthread.php?t=33884