Please listen to my song

[holnrew]

Constructive feedback is welcome. I am aware of timing issues and a bit of crappy singing, but see it as a diamond in the rough; does it have potential?

It's "Lazy Man" at http://myspace.com/mrholnrew

[Prawnatron]

The guitar isn't too brilliant, it's just a chord progression but not bad for a first shot.

[holnrew]

I find it difficult to record guitar, the extra pressure makes me cock up more, which is why it's not more complex! I normally like to fingerpick it.

[SuperDuperPooper]

good...i like it. :D

keep it up

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[holnrew]

good...i like it. :D

keep it up

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Thanks dude.

[Pancakes]

I like the lyrics, and yeah the guitar is simple, but keep it that way. My one critism is length, make it longer and maybe include a bridge. Good song and I hope to hear more from you in the future.

[holnrew]

I like the lyrics, and yeah the guitar is simple, but keep it that way. My one critism is length, make it longer and maybe include a bridge. Good song and I hope to hear more from you in the future.

Thanks a lot, I like to try and make things catchy. I do have a bridge, I just forgot to include it.

[Kippers]

Not bad.

[lobster bisque anyone?]

Damn thats catchy. I listened to it last night and its still stuck in my head. You should re-record it and add in that bridge.

[Greger]

intro reminds me so much of Bob dylan - Tangled up in blue.

But otherwise it was pretty neat, you should sing a bit louder though imo :o