Some Acoustic Songs of Mine

[The_Solipsist]

http://www.garageband.com/artist/assassinloki090

Lanugo is, as I've been told my friends and such, my best. So atleast give that one a listening to.

Not all that great, but, these were recorded(horrible quality by the way) almost a year and a half ago, and have since been rewritten, hopefully a little bit better.

[Shmuh]

How do you expect people without Garage Band to listen to that?

[The_Solipsist]

How do you expect people without Garage Band to listen to that?

By clicking on it, then clicking the '|>' icon to play the song?

[Shmuh]

When I click on it, it asks me to download a Garage band file. Myspace pls.

[The_Solipsist]

Sorry, don't have a myspace. It seems to only do that to you as far as I know. If it reacts that way for more people, I'll just remove the post.

[Antisaint]

Worked alright for me, and I don't have a Mac/Garage Band. I can't tell you much more than I didn't like it, and to stop sliding your fingers along the strings.

[Shmuh]

Oh, hahehahe. I had adblock on and I forgot. But uhm, it's alright. It's really choppy, and you should have practiced a bit more before recording.

[The_Solipsist]

Oh, hahehahe. I had adblock on and I forgot. But uhm, it's alright. It's really choppy, and you should have practiced a bit more before recording.

Admittedly, these recordings suck, and my playing wasn't very good at the time there were recorded, which was about more than a year ago. They were basically meant as demos, so I'd remember the songs for later work and recording. I've since matured my in my playing style, as well as rewritten the songs.

But, this is all I have 'til I can go to a recording studio to record all of it, but when that happens, I should have a pretty good allotment of songs and such, hopefully MUCH better than these I've offered.

Thanks for the critique though!

[Greger]

Kinda sloppy, not a big fan of just accoustic but pretty good overall :)

[Jiveturkey]

Metronomes are you friend. At least record with a click track, your rhythms are off quite a bit. Also, practice your songs so that they are mistake free. It's not good when a flub is evident in an original recording. Finally, your single note lines sound plain. I'd experiment with multi tracking or simply harmonizing yourself. They don't sound bad just empty. You have ideas now its time to put them to work. Consider the song a work in progress.

[The_Solipsist]

Admittedly, these recordings suck, and my playing wasn't very good at the time there were recorded, which was about more than a year ago. They were basically meant as demos, so I'd remember the songs for later work and recording. I've since matured my in my playing style, as well as rewritten the songs.



Metronomes are you friend. At least record with a click track, your rhythms are off quite a bit. Also, practice your songs so that they are mistake free. It's not good when a flub is evident in an original recording. Finally, your single note lines sound plain. I'd experiment with multi tracking or simply harmonizing yourself. They don't sound bad just empty. You have ideas now its time to put them to work. Consider the song a work in progress.

Thanks.