The Circus Duel

[Tyler_Legrand]

I've played with animation. Now I've played with composition.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EBah07l3Mwk

EBah07l3Mwk

[Tyler_Legrand]

(Edit: Deleted video so I could update 'fixed' version but now it's taking forever to upload :frown:)

Edit #2: Dammit that was supposed to be an edit not a quote. Anyway, here's the new version:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWOLjQUARKY

AWOLjQUARKY

[Casalen]

I saw it before that issue, not a bad start. What did you use to key them out?

[Android]

Oh I get it, they're juggling grenades. :ahe: It's sort of ok I guess. I prefer your animations though.

[Godly]

It took me a while to get that they're grenades. They don't look that much like grenades, but once you get that it makes sense.

It's not fantastic, but for something you're only starting to get into, it's a good start.

[Nemmukat]

Thats great!

[Casalen]

So there seems to be a large amount of green spill or poor feathering, especially on the guy camera left. Since I don't know what you're using I can't be specific, but most compositing programs have a spill suppressor that can help a lot when the scene wasn't lit perfectly. You may have also overdone the feathering. I have a cleanup plugin that will put an edge matte on the subject to get rid of the softness, but I don't know if you have something for that. Taking care of those and lighting it well (soft on the back, separate from the front) would be much cleaner for the people portion of things. I admit it's hard to tell for sure from something where the people are small and it's encoded to go on Youtube, but that's what it looks like.

[ChuckNorris]

pretty cool duder.