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Matterialize
09-09-2007, 6:09 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs20/f/2007/252/c/e/OXTAIL_SMASH_by_Matterialize.png
It's my very first "real" sketch on my tablet! :dance:
So, comment and all that. Harsh as you like.
Lynley
09-09-2007, 6:27 PM
I really like the legs on the noob. And the hair on Ox. Ox's feet are bothering me, though.
BAN ME PLEASE
09-09-2007, 6:27 PM
It's pretty decent for a cartoon.
Awesome out of 10. I have been immortalised. I love it.
InTransit
09-09-2007, 10:03 PM
Haha that is awesome Matt. I actually like Ox's feet because they look like ox-feet.
jewishjosh
09-09-2007, 10:07 PM
It's quite Spartan, is that the look you were going for? Either way, good job. :gj:
Mobius
09-09-2007, 10:14 PM
That's fucking awesome.
10/10
Matterialize
09-09-2007, 11:03 PM
Thanks everyone :dance:
Nope, not Spartan or anything. Just Oxtail beating the crap out of some Showcase noob. I'm glad you guys like it.
Dacada
09-09-2007, 11:20 PM
I love his hairiness and happy-face kilt (which you should totally colour for great justice). I don't like how sketchily you drew it. Drawing sketchy is awesome when you don't use tiny tiny lines, which just makes it look sorta messy.
So basically I want to see it more complete looking, with longer lines. (y)
gizzalove
09-09-2007, 11:22 PM
His feet kind of look like they melted but other then that I love it. Great job.
acci_dent
09-10-2007, 2:28 AM
Again, something against the feet. The one on the left looks like a duck foot, the right one looks like a claw. I'm liking all the hair and the sheriff star is awesome.
Tatter
09-10-2007, 2:31 AM
The only thing that looks wrong is the feet. Everything else is great, anyway.
Nice work Matt.
Hey Ox, better get gymming if you want to keep up appearences eh.
Ox's closed eyes make his punch look sort of awkward, but it's an awesome picture nonetheless.
Would it be ridiculous of me to say that's a pretty sexy caricature of Oxtail, though? :shobon:
I_Smell
09-10-2007, 12:24 PM
Funny and epic. Do another frame after the punch- From behind Ox.
+If you colour it, make a layer behind this, select a bigass brush and just colour it in manually.
DEATH TO AMERICA
09-10-2007, 7:52 PM
I don't really like the face on Ox. His body's all muscly and feirce but then he has this cartoony face. Other than that (and the feet) it's great.
Do not listen to pooeater, it's awesome.
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