Madness Day Submission!

[Dutchinlive]

Hey guys, I made a little madness day submission for this years competition, since Explosm and Newgrounds are kindred spirits, I thought you guys might want to see what a motivated forum lurker like myself is capable of.

Remember to vote!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/512159

[exetra]

I hate madness so I'm almost definitely not going to like it but I'll watch it anyway.

EDIT: It was actually pretty cool (up until the part where it stopped loading because my internet sucks balls).

[Pachycephelosaurus]

Just watched it. It was pretty good overall, but there were a couple things that bothered me:

-The music didn't really match the tone of the animation
-At times, the voices would be extremely quiet and difficult to hear (ex: the Mandalorian commander on the bridge)
-While the lightsaber vs. blaster fights kicked ass, the final battle in which all three were using lightsabers didn't strike me as being anywhere near as exciting
-The story could have used a little more exposition; it took me a second to figure out what had happened

I'd like to see a second version of this. A lot of it was pretty impressive. I especially liked the space battle bits.

[Matterialize]

I agree with Pach. The saber fight at the end was good, but for the big climactic battle of the film it needs to be ten times as awesome as the other fights. To fit in with the Madness series, that is. The female Jedi's voice actor was pretty bad too but that's not your fault.

Otherwise, I thought it kicked ass and you should definitely make a sequel, or an extremely polished and fine-tuned remake.

[Dutchinlive]

I agree with Pach. The saber fight at the end was good, but for the big climactic battle of the film it needs to be ten times as awesome as the other fights. To fit in with the Madness series, that is. The female Jedi's voice actor was pretty bad too but that's not your fault.

Otherwise, I thought it kicked ass and you should definitely make a sequel, or an extremely polished and fine-tuned remake.

Haha, yeah, a sequel will be in order for next years madness day, I'm yet to find out if I even won anything as I can't find if Krinkels has made a listing. But yeah, I know I botched the final scene, I only had a day in which to complete it, poor time management on my part nothing else. I'm glad you guys didn't think it sucked balls, and I'm pretty stoked about it being on the front page (hell, I think it replaced 'waiting for the bus').

I wanted to submit it here as a work in progress, but just didn't have the time, and didn't have the time to fix anything that people recommended needed fixing..