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Kevosk
09-14-2007, 12:27 AM
We were learning about this stuff in history and how it was used it Vietnam and I was like "agent orange sounds sort of like some kind of crime fighting dude" and everyone else was like "..." and I was like "yeah fuck you guys" and made this cartoon.

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/6803/ao1oj8.png
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3149/ao2fh0.png
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/8409/ao3vf0.png

What do you guys think?
Lamb
09-14-2007, 12:34 AM
it's ok... but a little too hyper for a comic... make some pause panels, maybe if it were animated... way different
exetra
09-14-2007, 12:36 AM
You can kinda tell you rushed it. The execution of the joke would explain your classmate's reaction.
Kevosk
09-14-2007, 12:38 AM
You can kinda tell you rushed it. The execution of the joke would explain your classmate's reaction.

I didn't draw it in class, I just made the lame joke in class.
DoaJ
09-14-2007, 12:49 AM
Shit.
Sorry, I voted 'cause I thought it was about the band.
They put on wonderful concerts.

Uhh.
I got excited..>.>

Anyway, the comic isn't too bad.
But I'm sure you could've executed the situation better.
Just treat it like a story or school paper and make another 'draft'. After a few it'll probably be better. If not, then I recommend asking for a bit of assistance or pointers. :P
BAN ME PLEASE
09-14-2007, 6:44 AM
I liked the last panel.
I_Smell
09-14-2007, 8:10 AM
I liked "Did somebody juat say... TOXIN?" because noone did and I don't get it. Also, I struggled to read carcinogenic lead, making it all the funnier.

I thought it was gonna be about the other Agent Orange =/
Dacada
09-15-2007, 1:37 AM
I sniggered. His eyebrow-raise could have been higher and the art could have been better, but who's complaining when you have a last panel with a guy who has a cigarette puncturing his throat?
The Fetus
09-17-2007, 1:02 PM
It was okay, I laughed. My dad was exposed to Agent Orange in Nam!
Godly
09-17-2007, 5:57 PM
You got about one tenth of a chuckle.

In other words it's somewhere between "It needs a lot of work" and "It sucks so much cock I can not even begin to describe"
Bassz
09-17-2007, 11:39 PM
I gave it 5 for excellence and /5 because I wanted to.

Eat that Viet Congs.