So Good To See You

[Android]

I figured I'd start posting some music here again. This is a song I made a while back. So Good To See You. (http://www.orbitfiles.com/download/id1148016451) Comments and feedback are always welcome and appreciated.

[irondragons]

It was alright. It feels very disjointed, it starts immediately, no build up and it hasn't been circled around any particular chorus or set of notes/beats, which is only exceptable when you are writting classical music.

Its nothing more than an electronic scrambler with a nice bassline too me.

[ne3]

No intro, it sounds like it's being played in a bathroom, and the rhytm annoys me. Would you be kind to post the lyrics here, for more feedback, since the vocals are unclear, for me anyway.

[Android]

Oh so good to see you in a place you should not be.
Your death is in stereo, certain insanity. Chorus

Repeats.

You give and give and get nothing in return
People take and take, no lessons learned.
Floating in a sea of stupidity,
You are the weight bound to my feet.
Just can't seem to keep my head above or stay afloat,
Drowning in this sea, this place I call home.
Crawling, clutching, coarse sands on the shore,
Slipping through my fingers again once more.
I open up the door and walk through it,
that damn bitch is there and I knew it.

Repeat beginning, and end.

The main line is what it revolves around, which is a chorus. I suppose I could rework some of the beats, and remix it a bit. Thanks for the comments.

[Ox]

The vocals at the beginning need to be louder / clearer. There's no real tune with the "rap" which I'm not keen on.

It's kinda cool, but just needs a few more touches. I also agree that an intro would make it better.