Transfat (my electronic musical lovechild)

[somewhatnew]

www.myspace.com/transfattymusic
That is my Myspace. I've only got three songs up.

I have one complete album that I am still to inept to put on the internet for you guys to access.
I am now working on The Milkman Rocks Your Neighborhood: The Myspace EP.
It's an electronic rock opera.

For those of you that can only be cared to try out one song, I have the Tindeck posted below.
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/image/b/spnn (http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/spnn/mindtrip)

[Kass]

The song "Trip thru a planet" sounds like the theme song of a really girly really bad anime. (Which isn't actually a bad thing. That's just what it reminds me of.)

[somewhatnew]

The song "Trip thru a planet" sounds like the theme song of a really girly really bad anime. (Which isn't actually a bad thing. That's just what it reminds me of.)
When you say it like that... it kind of does.

[Matterialize]

The song "Trip thru a planet" sounds like the theme song of a really girly really bad anime. (Which isn't actually a bad thing. That's just what it reminds me of.)

Really? I don't think so.


No offense, but those three songs are kind of boring. I thought Enter Milkman was going to be cool, because it sounded really action-movie and sneaky and stuff... but then it turned out to be just the same lick repeated over and over again for the entire song. If I were you, I'd use Enter Milkman as a basis for a more full, complete version. Add different stuff to it, while keeping that same theme.

Oh, and you should ditch most of those fades in the song. What you've got now, for Enter Milkman, sounds like the just the ending or beginning of a really good song, looped over and over for a minute and eight seconds.

You need to add a lot more to the other songs too, but Enter Milkman was the most obvious. And has the most potential out of the three.

[abbey]

It sounds like you did it all on an old keyboard that only has shitty voices on it.

It's all pretty flat. (And I don't mean flat as in flat and sharp, I mean flat as in boring.)

[somewhatnew]

It sounds like you did it all on an old keyboard that only has shitty voices on it.

It's all pretty flat. (And I don't mean flat as in flat and sharp, I mean flat as in boring.)
Come now. If you can make fun of me I'll gladly make fun of you. No need to spam my threads with unconstructive comments.

[Shmuh]

She wasn't making fun of you, she was saying your music was pretty flat. I think that means you should try and... y'know, not make it flat.

If we made fun of you, you would know.

[exetra]

If you wanna post stuff just to get ass-kissing comments go to deviantart or something. vag's comment was a valid criticism. She's right in a way too, none of the songs were paticularly interesting.

If you think you need to "make fun" of me then You can eat (http://www.myspace.com/electroredux) my superiority (http://www.sectionz.com/artist.asp?SZID=29093) if thats what floats your boat.

Bear in mind I wouldn't be such a dick to you if you didn't come in with a stupid asshole "if you cant do better than me then stfu" attitude. I'm not a chef but I know when food tastes like shit. Same goes for music.

[somewhatnew]

I don't appreciate just telling me my music is crap.
Constructive criticism is what I want.