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Rano
05-13-2008, 10:30 AM
Impressions...
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3945/explosmi3pu9.png (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=explosmi3pu9.png)

Dabamash
05-13-2008, 10:48 AM
Ha, Ox, that was brilliant. Even though it copies Jon's to an extent, it was still pretty good.

Tyler_Legrand
05-13-2008, 10:52 AM
I don't find it funny. Maybe you do.

http://www.terminally-incoherent.com/img/facepalm.jpeg

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Ox
05-13-2008, 11:00 AM
Ha, Ox, that was brilliant. Even though it copies Jon's to an extent, it was still pretty good.

No, it's a very old comic I made months and months ago. I posted it in the old Fan Art, I was just pointing out that they were similar.

Edit: The tag on it says 2006. I made it roughly 2 years ago.

TuckerLOL
05-13-2008, 11:40 AM
Jon, you've made a bit of a splash. I liked the mirror one best.
Rano, pretty good.
Hats, you're always funny.
Monrail, that was good.

Joost
05-13-2008, 12:05 PM
Absolutely loving your comics, Jon! Keep it up!

Rano, nice! Is it just me or should it say "Expressions", by the way?

Power
05-13-2008, 12:34 PM
I don't no anybody else who had such a good start like jon, except MusicialIdiot :)

Nice one Ox, I think i should look into the older fan art threads, too.

By the way, where is he?

Slurpy
05-13-2008, 12:54 PM
http://www.terminally-incoherent.com/img/facepalm.jpeg
Haha, I laughed so hard at that xD

jontheninja
05-13-2008, 2:07 PM
Haha, Ox, nice comic. They say brilliant minds think alike ;)
Although I will say the punch lines were somewhat different. Mine was like "One man's messed frigging everything up by making a very minor mistake."
Wait, so was yours.
D:

Anyways, here's a few MORE.
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8606/myfkingeyedc5.th.png (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=myfkingeyedc5.png)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6381/lyinlionmw5.th.png (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lyinlionmw5.png)
TELL MEH WHEN YA WANT MORE.

Lag
05-13-2008, 2:27 PM
Question; how come you have all these ready made comics anywho? This all from some site of yours?
But by all means keep em comin.

jontheninja
05-13-2008, 2:28 PM
Yup they're from mah deviantart.

Caryla
05-13-2008, 3:09 PM
Yup, .png

Wow, so I totally missed out on the fact that there was another page.

Great comics though :)

Desert
05-13-2008, 3:37 PM
Hahaha, those last two were brilliant.

Relaps
05-13-2008, 3:53 PM
Next "Kris Conspiracy" comment or anything similar gets a TO.

Inkspill
05-13-2008, 4:27 PM
Is there any good free drawing program for mac, other than teal? (which sucks)

Relaps
05-13-2008, 4:34 PM
Download the flash trial.

Kay-Dree
05-13-2008, 4:50 PM
Hey All,

5 days i've been stuck at home because of fuckin war... lol anyways, while i was slipping between insanity and whatever is on the other side i managed to squeeze out my first comic! art isnt so good but hopefully it'll get better... criticism appreciated.

Peace

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/d18856404d3f28ec21f5a0f684358f09.png

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TuckerLOL
05-13-2008, 4:59 PM
Hey All,

5 days i've been stuck at home because of fuckin war... lol anyways, while i was slipping between insanity and whatever is on the other side i managed to squeeze out my first comic! art isnt so good but hopefully it'll get better... criticism appreciated.

Peace

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/d18856404d3f28ec21f5a0f684358f09.png

Haha, I actually laughed pretty hard. The art's not great, but the joke's pretty good. Nice one!

Kay-Dree
05-13-2008, 5:07 PM
Haha, I actually laughed pretty hard. The art's not great, but the joke's great. Nice one!

Thanks dude, im trying to get better on the whole computer art... not to mention im working on a touchpad lol... i need to get a tablet!

Sewicyde
05-13-2008, 5:17 PM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c389/unsungzero00000/thatswhathesaid.png
Jon has inspired me.

MangaFreak
05-13-2008, 5:27 PM
Sewicyde, that was awful.

Vortex
05-13-2008, 5:39 PM
How was that inspired by Jon, Sewicyde? It was terrible.

Excellent comics, Jon. I laughed at the majority of those.

Sewicyde
05-13-2008, 5:52 PM
How was that inspired by Jon, Sewicyde? It was terrible.

He had a wrestler comic.

HappyPalooza
05-13-2008, 5:53 PM
Woah guys, Vortex is back. Make another comic, Vortex!

jontheninja
05-13-2008, 6:00 PM
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/8203/assesjg9.th.png (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=assesjg9.png)
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/3104/grasskm8.th.png (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=grasskm8.png)
done for EVER

Kay-Dree
05-13-2008, 6:07 PM
Just posting a pic rather then a link guys...

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/d18856404d3f28ec21f5a0f684358f09.png

HappyPalooza
05-13-2008, 6:11 PM
It's just as bad as it was 9 posts ago.

Kay-Dree
05-13-2008, 6:20 PM
It's just as bad as it was 9 posts ago.

i was just posting a pic rather than a link... and how about some constructive criticism to go with that backlash HappyPalooza? What makes it so bad so i can improve on the next comics?

HappyPalooza
05-13-2008, 6:42 PM
Art and the joke need work would be a lighter way of putting it, I suppose. Also, just edit the last post if you want to show the pic instead of the link. Otherwise, you look like you're trying to draw attention back to your comic.

Kay-Dree
05-13-2008, 6:49 PM
Art and the joke need work would be a lighter way of putting it, I suppose. Also, just edit the last post if you want to show the pic instead of the link. Otherwise, you look like you're trying to draw attention back to your comic.

Ah, Good to know, thanks... ill work on my stuff a little more next time, its just really hard to work on a touch pad

tunacake
05-13-2008, 6:50 PM
Kay-Dree outline your heads in black. I can't tell where the background ends and the head starts.

DieHard
05-13-2008, 6:54 PM
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/8203/assesjg9.th.png (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=assesjg9.png)
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/3104/grasskm8.th.png (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=grasskm8.png)
done for EVER

I swear to god, I'm not trying to bandwagon or anything but every single one of your comics has made me laugh. I really need to look into your deviant art page.

moosehead
05-13-2008, 7:03 PM
Jon why are you done for EVER!?
You gottem eating out of your hands!
I like your comics as well.

Chips
05-13-2008, 7:06 PM
Oh god that first one was awesome Jon. "Urk!" Hahahahaha. Minefield one was ok, but preferred the first one.

Oh, and the wrestling one you did also made me laugh hard. I had to sit there (because I'm slow) and look at the last panel for like 30 seconds to realise what had just happened.

jontheninja
05-13-2008, 7:27 PM
I swear to god, I'm not trying to bandwagon or anything but every single one of your comics has made me laugh. I really need to look into your deviant art page.
Really glad that ya like them, this type of positive reinforcement is what KEEPS MEH GOING. I RUN ON YOUR complements. :)

Jon why are you done for EVER!?
You gottem eating out of your hands!
I like your comics as well.
Heh, by "ever" I meant "tonight" on account of studying I gotta do. It's gonna take FORRRREVER.

Oh god that first one was awesome Jon. "Urk!" Hahahahaha. Minefield one was ok, but preferred the first one.

Oh, and the wrestling one you did also made me laugh hard. I had to sit there (because I'm slow) and look at the last panel for like 30 seconds to realise what had just happened.
XD those are the types of reactions I like. Sometimes the best ones are the ones that make ya think a bit and then go OMG when you finally understand it. It's a satisfying experience.

potolife
05-13-2008, 7:32 PM
I've really liked all your's so far, Jon. Keep 'em up!

El Travo
05-13-2008, 7:59 PM
Jon, you are really damn consistant, keep it up they are making me laugh!

jontheninja
05-13-2008, 8:16 PM
why thank you guys :3

and now, I show you all why it is a good reason to live in the fattest country IN THE WORLD.
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/373/awesomebesitypc5.th.png (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=awesomebesitypc5.png)

Lag
05-13-2008, 8:17 PM
Oh shit, that was hilarious.

Voracious32
05-13-2008, 8:25 PM
Jon, your comics have been awesome so far, but if you don't slow down, you'll probably be out by the end of the week.

LaPhBu
05-13-2008, 9:12 PM
HOLY SHIT JON, I have never laughed at a comic here before and that one made me laugh so hard. Kudos to you man.

splitfire
05-13-2008, 9:38 PM
another one.. i hope you like my new style
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1167/bukkakewj9.png

gordanthefree
05-14-2008, 12:40 AM
Sorry Remontor, but Jon is seriously starting to out compete you. GET ON YOUR GAME MAN!

Pocket Mouse
05-14-2008, 4:25 AM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/85/91337992xu5.png

MistyTehMoose
05-14-2008, 4:47 AM
Thanks for pointing out that those were sharks, I never would have known.

Slurpy
05-14-2008, 4:52 AM
That was probably the most boring comic i've ever see, seriously. Think harder next time.

Pocket Mouse
05-14-2008, 5:23 AM
whaat? thats a bit harsh, the most boring comic you've ever see? i thought it was alright, jeez. insulted.

MistyTehMoose
05-14-2008, 5:31 AM
I'm insulted you posted it in the first place.

Tyler_Legrand
05-14-2008, 5:36 AM
I'm insulted that you're insulted

Ox
05-14-2008, 5:38 AM
I liked it, PM. The uneccesary annotations just added to the funny.

You people are meanies.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 6:01 AM
HOLY SHIT JON, I have never laughed at a comic here before and that one made me laugh so hard. Kudos to you man.
this is great honor! no seppuku today...

and i give you...
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4744/nutsbq6.th.png (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=nutsbq6.png)

Lamb
05-14-2008, 6:16 AM
You people are meanies.

Said their leader with an evil smirk.

r0xx
05-14-2008, 8:28 AM
I liked it, PM. The uneccesary annotations just added to the funny.

You people are meanies.

Pocketmouse, I'm with Ox on this one, I didn't think it was that funny but laughed hard at the shark annotaions

Oh, and Jon, I don't know if anyone mentioned it yet but your comics are good, that last one was maybe the funniest one yet. :gj:
.

TuckerLOL
05-14-2008, 10:50 AM
Thanks for pointing out that those were sharks, I never would have known.

I hope that wasn't sarcasm. I thought that they were the ears of a giant, black cat.
I'd have been lost to the joke, if not for the annotations.

splitfire, meh. Decent art.
jon, you're great. Didn't like the last though.

Caryla
05-14-2008, 11:14 AM
Wow, wow, wow. Jon I loved that "Fattest Country" comic. I laughed so hard, I scared my daughter :D

splitfire
05-14-2008, 1:16 PM
why noboddy say anything about my comic?

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Ox
05-14-2008, 1:18 PM
why nobuddy say anything about my comic?

Because your comic fucking sucked and everyone thinks your a retard. There, you happy now you got your precious fucking answer?!

tunacake
05-14-2008, 1:29 PM
Hey now. Spitfire yours got a giggle out of me.
Also, nice art.

RiFo
05-14-2008, 1:45 PM
jon: i expected a little more fatties, besides that one of the best fan comics ever!

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 1:54 PM
jon: i expected a little more fatties, besides that one of the best fan comics ever!
I hear ya on that one, after I made it I was like "Oh crap there's only like one fat guy out of 10."

I shall fix it... SOMEDAY.

Rano
05-14-2008, 2:23 PM
Witch of the followings are better ?
I'm trying to find my true character...
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1791/sfhgsthns3.png (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sfhgsthns3.png)

leader
05-14-2008, 2:30 PM
Number 2. Way better.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 2:39 PM
I like number 1 better actually. Maybe I just like em taller, makes them able to do more stuff, like flying.

Rano
05-14-2008, 2:42 PM
I like number 1 better actually. Maybe I just like em taller, makes them able to do more stuff, like flying.

You've got a big point there...

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 3:01 PM
Got a brand new one for ya guys, tell me what you TEENK.

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9819/aalazyck7.th.png (http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aalazyck7.png)

Shagg
05-14-2008, 3:09 PM
Jon it's very surprising how quickly you've taken over Fanart and how little negativity there is to you; keep it up.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 3:12 PM
Jon it's very surprising how quickly you've taken over Fanart and how little negativity there is to you; keep it up.
Thanks bud! There's been a few duds but I think a lot of that has more to do with opinion. In fact, EVERYTHING has to do with opinion. I'm sure plenty of people hate em and just aren't speaking up.

Is there usually a lot of negativity going around?

also, I love Shit Kicker. You are a God for making him.

Rano
05-14-2008, 3:27 PM
A tryout for new character...
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5763/proovqv5.png (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=proovqv5.png)

PyroOwned
05-14-2008, 3:41 PM
Number two but taller, definately. I have really awkward characters for doing anything (my avatar).

MangaFreak
05-14-2008, 3:47 PM
Well this is my first comic. Me and my friend were talking about how much Soulja Boy sucked and this came into my head. The joke is kinda badly executed, but I couldn't think of any other way to do it. Comments?

http://i31.tinypic.com/1zl4nma.png

Inkspill
05-14-2008, 4:03 PM
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=19490&id=1257823935&ref=mf
First attempt here.

Inkspill
05-14-2008, 4:03 PM
its not posting. fuck.

r0xx
05-14-2008, 4:18 PM
Well this is my first comic. Me and my friend were talking about how much Soulja Boy sucked and this came into my head. The joke is kinda badly executed, but I couldn't think of any other way to do it. Comments?

Crappy comic

Deja Vu, Didn't you already post this shitty comic? I know I saw it the other day.

Marijuana
05-14-2008, 4:25 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/4184/bestcomiceverip7.png

:roffle:

trainpark
05-14-2008, 4:43 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii13/Trainpark666/Mime.png

Funny?

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 4:50 PM
Trainpark, I liked it XD

too bad mimes and real people don't operate by the same laws of physical objects.
also
SMAAAASH

Marijuana
05-14-2008, 5:00 PM
And mine?

trainpark
05-14-2008, 5:06 PM
Thx, Jon. U seem to rule this thread, congrats. Ok, here's another.

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii13/Trainpark666/PS3.png

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 5:09 PM
And mine?
It... I don't know, it doesn't really have a point.

Grab my butt!
No.
wtf
You could do that with anything.
Let me rape you!
No.
Just try putting a little bit more time into an idea, man.

Thx, Jon. U seem to rule this thread, congrats. Ok, here's another.

ps3comic
I'd expect that more from a 360, but still nice. Reminds me of all these wars between fanboys when in the end the graphics AREN'T EVEN REAL ANYWAYS!!!?

AND FINALLY,
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4182/abirdim2.th.png (http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=abirdim2.png)

TuckerLOL
05-14-2008, 5:29 PM
Hahaha, jon, I laughed. Although I'd have done Green's face the same, at the end, with Red looking shocked.
That Soulja Boy one seemed even shittier, the second time 'round.
trainpark, you're pretty good.
Marijuana, you're trying to pull off the sort of humour that only people with fans can do. E.G. Kris, Dave, Matt and Rob.

But it still sucked.

Marijuana
05-14-2008, 5:32 PM
Marijuana, you're trying to pull off the sort of humour that only people with fans can do. E.G. Kris, Dave, Matt and Rob.

But it still sucked.

That was kind of the point I was trying to make. If somebody who isn't known for his great comics makes something like that he gets flamed, but when a famous comic maker makes it, it's good. That's not right. You should rate a comic on the comic, not the maker.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 5:45 PM
I think the difference is that the "popular" people have already proven themselves and, although they may have one kinda crappy comic, their fans know them and that they're just having an off day. They'll be cut some slack.

But when a new guy comes in and sucks ass, people aren't gonna be as lenient. It may be unfair, but that's what rep does. GIVES YA ELBOW ROOM.

trainpark
05-14-2008, 5:56 PM
alright peeples, G2G, be back tomorrow with fresh, new comics!

TuckerLOL
05-14-2008, 7:08 PM
I think the difference is that the "popular" people have already proven themselves and, although they may have one kinda crappy comic, their fans know them and that they're just having an off day. They'll be cut some slack.

But when a new guy comes in and sucks ass, people aren't gonna be as lenient. It may be unfair, but that's what rep does. GIVES YA ELBOW ROOM.

Yeah, Chase week sucked, in my opinion. The first two were good, then it seemed too repetitive.
I know Chase is well known. BUTT he's hardly C&H.

...yes, that whole post was leading up to that one pun.

Sewicyde
05-14-2008, 7:36 PM
Chase week was torture for me. I have no respect for him now.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 7:39 PM
I never even knew who chase was so when his comics were on I was just like "ok"

It was kind of interesting to see how he made it different each day.

Sewicyde
05-14-2008, 7:42 PM
I thought it was kind of interesting how I died a little inside for every day of the week.

Relaps
05-14-2008, 7:53 PM
Chase week was the greatest guest week in existence, and those who really don't see that only make it greater.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 7:54 PM
TWAS AN ACQUIRED TASTE, ay!!!!?

Raxo
05-14-2008, 8:05 PM
Butts are the epitome of comedy.

Jon that last comic was a mis out many hits. Too predictable.

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 8:17 PM
Butts are the epitome of comedy.

Jon that last comic was a mis out many hits. Too predictable.
bawwww

you're right though, maybe he should have ended up flying. Nobody would have expected that.

can i make it up to you with....
THIS!?
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2931/wrongmovepy7.th.png (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wrongmovepy7.png)

Inkspill
05-14-2008, 9:09 PM
http://fw.members.freewebs.com/MembersB/EditPage/index.jsp?token=d579e23df6f60de6119ea8640b8&pageID=97339704
last shot.

Taerran
05-14-2008, 9:13 PM
Ink, those were horrible.

MangaFreak
05-14-2008, 9:18 PM
http://fw.members.freewebs.com/MembersB/EditPage/index.jsp?token=d579e23df6f60de6119ea8640b8&pageID=97339704
last shot.

My good sir, I have but one thing to say to you
:gtfo:

El Travo
05-14-2008, 9:34 PM
Ink, those comics make me want to :explode:

Yeah, didn't like them.

Jon, I'm still liking them but like other people have said before me, you should pace yourself a little so you don't run out of comics so quickly.

Caryla
05-14-2008, 9:38 PM
Jon, the rap battle totally makes up for the birdy (but I still laughed on the birdy.)

jontheninja
05-14-2008, 9:48 PM
Ink, those comics make me want to :explode:

Yeah, didn't like them.

Jon, I'm still liking them but like other people have said before me, you should pace yourself a little so you don't run out of comics so quickly.
I'm horrible at pacing myself. I got excited that everyone likes the comics so I went crazy. Right now I'm just using up all my deviantart stuff and have a whole stockpile of other ideas that I haven't drawn up. So yeah..

Jon, the rap battle totally makes up for the birdy (but I still laughed on the birdy.)
Thanks.

I feel kinda bleh because I actually really liked Mr. Bird. Yeah, I know it was predictable, but I felt like it captured something... the simple naivety of children, their trials against nature, experiencing life, etc. Maybe I'm in the wrong place with some of this stuff.

I'll just do more rapidfire humor.

Mango
05-14-2008, 10:22 PM
Jon - I liked the birdy comic. Nothing funnier than childhood stupidity. I mean innocence.
The rap one made me bust a gut.

Love your comics. :)

Claite
05-15-2008, 1:59 AM
Hey all (I'm completely new the the forums and figured I'd post here first since I had an idea in mind)....

Let me know what you think:

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/3514/deaddadjokeup3.jpg

The art isn't as good as I hoped, and the whole "necrophilia" joke might be over-played out, but I figured it was a good place to start. I'm planning on starting to use a tablet soon so hopefully my art gets better?

(As for actual flash tips, what smoothening do you guys use? It was defaulted to 50 when I opened it up, but I found that to be brutally overdoing it. I eventually set it to 40 (which explains the somewhat change in style and drawing within this one comic) and felt better with it, but then again, I wouldn't know)

Criticism appreciated, and if you feel like telling me I suck, that's cool too, I actually have a self-esteem that isn't destroyed by internet comments :P

I'd also like to say that I really like Ursers', Shagg's, Hats of's, Relap's and other people's work from the first couple pages. xD

Anyways, I'm done jabbering.

Ox
05-15-2008, 2:04 AM
When it comes to drawing, use the pen tool, rather than the paintbrush. You get an even line that way and it looks a lot better.

Highlight uneven lines and click the smooth button to straighten them out if they're a bit wonky.

Also, when you're saving your comics, save them as a ".png" file type, rather than a ".jpg", that'll stop it from becoming pixelated.

The joke itself is certainly over-used. Try working on something a bit more unique.

Claite
05-15-2008, 2:10 AM
When it comes to drawing, use the pen tool, rather than the paintbrush. You get an even line that way and it looks a lot better.

Highlight uneven lines and click the smooth button to straighten them out if they're a bit wonky.

Also, when you're saving your comics, save them as a ".png" file type, rather than a ".jpg", that'll stop it from becoming pixelated.

The joke itself is certainly over-used. Try working on something a bit more unique.

I figured on the joke part :S Oh well

as for the file format saving, I did save it as a .png at first, but for some odd reason when I loaded it into image shack it was completely black.... hmmm, maybe I clicked the wrong file and in fact saved it as something else...

and for the drawing tips, thanks a bunch. I'll try to think of something unique then apply your suggestions. I'm not really one for making a comic that doesn't have a good joke just for the sake of working on the art...

oh, and ox, i like your drawings as well xD I forgot the names of the people's drawings i was looking at.

Ox
05-15-2008, 2:32 AM
I'm not really one for making a comic that doesn't have a good joke just for the sake of working on the art...

I like this guy already.

Nexus
05-15-2008, 8:49 AM
Don't ask me why, cheeky little Zulu warrior or something...

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk64/theNexus80/Zulu.png

jontheninja - I do enjoy your comics. No criticism from me.

Deja Vu, Didn't you already post this shitty comic? I know I saw it the other day.

MangaFreak- It sure was shitty.

TuckerLOL
05-15-2008, 12:27 PM
Nexus, what the fuck was that?

Claite
05-15-2008, 3:04 PM
Newest one :)

I wanted to play around with breaking the fourth wall? Or whatever it is you call it...

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4163/hardhityw9.png

I used the pen tool this time, but it annoyed the crap out of me. How do I stop it from snapping to every damn spec on the page? It's extremely difficult to work with :S

As before, criticism very welcome!

EDIT: Having thought about the comic more, I'm unhappy with the wording in the first frame... but I can't think of anything better... Suggestions?

EDIT 2: I think that saying "I'll hit you so hard, it'll be tomorrow!" is better, but I'm too lazy to edit the picture (lol)

Rano
05-15-2008, 3:12 PM
Quite good ;)
Uhh, I can't help you out with your problem, sorry .

Inkspill
05-15-2008, 7:50 PM
IN RETROSPECT.
You all have my absolute agreement. They sucked. I am taking this one chance to redeem myself. If these are not slightly more up to par, ill back away from this http://fw.members.freewebs.com/MembersB/EditPage/index.jsp?token=c514980a152265a3119ef616372&pageID=97409253
Thanks for the eye opener. I dont know what i was on.
Please give criticism.

jontheninja
05-15-2008, 7:57 PM
IN RETROSPECT.
You all have my absolute agreement. They sucked. I am taking this one chance to redeem myself. If these are not slightly more up to par, ill back away from this http://fw.members.freewebs.com/MembersB/EditPage/index.jsp?token=c514980a152265a3119ef616372&pageID=97409253
Thanks for the eye opener. I dont know what i was on.
teehee, I like the idea. That the actual boxes are part of the environment.

nice job, definitely better than the others.

MangaFreak
05-15-2008, 8:27 PM
IN RETROSPECT.
You all have my absolute agreement. They sucked. I am taking this one chance to redeem myself. If these are not slightly more up to par, ill back away from this http://fw.members.freewebs.com/MembersB/EditPage/index.jsp?token=c514980a152265a3119ef616372&pageID=97409253
Thanks for the eye opener. I dont know what i was on.
Please give criticism.

:gtfo:

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jontheninja
05-15-2008, 8:47 PM
I would like you guys to have this.
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4152/supermanoc0.th.png (http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?image=supermanoc0.png)
edit: green guy is lex, if you didn't guess.

Mr. Crow
05-15-2008, 8:52 PM
Tell me that the man in green is Lex Luthor and I'll love you forever.

jontheninja
05-15-2008, 8:55 PM
Tell me that the man in green is Lex Luthor and I'll love you forever.
Yes

I never really found a way to make it obvious that it was him.

Inkspill
05-15-2008, 9:02 PM
Yes

I never really found a way to make it obvious that it was him.
Its obvious. I laughed hard.

gordanthefree
05-15-2008, 11:41 PM
Someone should give a TO to Jon... for so many good comics :D.

Lag
05-16-2008, 12:44 AM
Why would he get TO'd for that?

Jezzas
05-16-2008, 1:21 AM
Yeah, so. First try, criticisim is total welcome.
I totally created an account just so I could do this too.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y188/Jezzatipsy2/Comic1-1.png

Edit: Some of the lines are a bit off, I didn't have my mouse with me so I got stuck with my touchpad. That's my excuse and I'm sticking with it!

Claite
05-16-2008, 2:06 AM
Yeah, so. First try, criticisim is total welcome.
I totally created an account just so I could do this too.

the comic

Edit: Some of the lines are a bit off, I didn't have my mouse with me so I got stuck with my touchpad. That's my excuse and I'm sticking with it!

I thought it was pretty funny joke wise. I smirked xD

As for the art, I won't really say much since you said you got stuck with a touch pad...

Tyler_Legrand
05-16-2008, 7:15 AM
http://www.legrandanimations.com/Nerd.jpg

MistyTehMoose
05-16-2008, 7:17 AM
Thats so sad :(

Tyler_Legrand
05-16-2008, 7:19 AM
NOOOO you made a new page Misty, now no one'll see it.

Urser
05-16-2008, 7:31 AM
I saw it. I loved it. I came on it.

Chips
05-16-2008, 7:50 AM
Tyler that was great haha.

Haven't posted a comic in ages.
Large Version (http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/Balloon_Head/Cyanide%20and%20Happiness%20Fanart/tetrislove2-1.png)

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/Balloon_Head/Cyanide%20and%20Happiness%20Fanart/tetrislove.png

Tyler_Legrand
05-16-2008, 9:45 AM
I thought it'd be nitpicky to point it out, but since you've taken the time to fix some spellings... You missed out the two "your"s which should be "you're"s in the first frame.

Dag
05-16-2008, 10:36 AM
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/8126/aidstestlw0.png

some n00b
05-16-2008, 11:26 AM
Haha, Dag, that was pretty good. Well executed and i'm loving the art!

Power
05-16-2008, 12:34 PM
Dag that joke was old/stolen -.-

Jezzas that was great. The best comic I've seen since a long long time.

Chips, decent as usual :) I laughed.

Slurpy
05-16-2008, 1:00 PM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4144/heartlc0.png (http://imageshack.us)

For those of you who don't understand: "<3"

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 1:25 PM
Chips: I like it XD
Tyler: that's just plain AWESOME.
slurpy: heh, he's all like "wow my heart looks weird", disregarding the fact that he JUST RIPPED HIS HEART OUT. i love understatement.

also,
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3846/santajk0.th.png (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=santajk0.png)

Taerran
05-16-2008, 1:50 PM
Jon, that was the first one I've liked so far. Probably your best too, in my opinion. It got a laugh out of me.

PyroOwned
05-16-2008, 1:52 PM
This page was full of win, awesome comics guys.

PartyPooper
05-16-2008, 2:28 PM
jon, I... I don't get it :(

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 2:29 PM
jon, I... I don't get it :(
the old mall santa guy had a vietnam war flashback.

Dag
05-16-2008, 2:32 PM
Dag that joke was old/stolen -.-
Yes that's right, but I liked the joke and wanted to make a comic with it.
Next time I'll try to think about a joke by myself ;)

And thanks for the commendation.

edit:
Jons comic: I like the facial expressions of your characters. Maybe you should have added a chair for ol' santa :D

PartyPooper
05-16-2008, 2:34 PM
the old mall santa guy had a vietnam war flashback.

I would use one of Urser's "I GEDDIT" comic, but I'm too lazy to find one now.
Anyway, now that I GEDDIT, I must say it's funny, just like your other ones. :D

HappyPalooza
05-16-2008, 3:08 PM
Jon, that was the first one I've liked so far. Probably your best too, in my opinion. It got a laugh out of me.

I'm opposite on this one. It wasn't on par at all with your others, jon. But amongst the great there'll be some misses.

Navi
05-16-2008, 3:09 PM
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q278/andynavi/Pizza23.jpg
The image was scrunched for some reason during the transfer to photoshop, oh well...enjoy. True Story.

Claite
05-16-2008, 3:21 PM
Image
The image was scrunched for some reason during the transfer to photoshop, oh well...enjoy. True Story.

It's true? LOL that just makes it all better... but please tell me the person didn't actually go to the rabbi with a freakin pork pizza in his hand xD

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Navi
05-16-2008, 3:42 PM
It's true? LOL that just makes it all better... but please tell me the person didn't actually go to the rabbi with a freakin pork pizza in his hand xD

I wish he had.

ShadowFlame
05-16-2008, 6:01 PM
Ok this is my first comic on MS paint.
be honest.
DOES IT SUCK!?!
Suggestions?
Rants?
Compleiments?
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll46/ShatOLame/OHLAWL.jpg

Chips
05-16-2008, 6:03 PM
DOES IT SUCK!?!

Yes.

ShadowFlame
05-16-2008, 6:06 PM
Yes.

I Admit.
Yes.
It does suck.
It was my first C+H Comic i have made :indiff:

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ShadowFlame
05-16-2008, 6:09 PM
Oh and it says "gay gay"
it was a typo
it is really "gay GUY"

Gryphon
05-16-2008, 6:09 PM
That's no longer an excuse, especially since you knew it sucked before you posted it.
Two thumbs way down.

ShadowFlame
05-16-2008, 6:14 PM
-_-
my flash broke
chill

Jonesy1
05-16-2008, 7:39 PM
So flash gives you all your funny jokes?

Because that was horrible. (Joke as well as art.)

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 8:19 PM
NEWDITY!
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/954/aanightimeya8.th.png (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aanightimeya8.png)

_Atheistic_
05-16-2008, 8:44 PM
Haha! Jon I've absolutely loved your last two, the santa one was 5 stars.

Urser
05-16-2008, 9:06 PM
Jon, I love you. But if I ever find out that you're stealing these comics from a German newspaper, I'll have to cut your throat.

Jezzas
05-16-2008, 9:28 PM
This is another go I had, I was going to put more colour into it, but I didn't have time. Still using my touchpad, so it's a little dodgy still.

Edit: I'd love any tips or criticisms too, but i hope you like it.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y188/Jezzatipsy2/orange.png

tunacake
05-16-2008, 9:34 PM
Shadowflame, that made me laugh more than a lot of the comics I've seen in this thread. I love the whole hunchback thing you were going for, and of course the hand-smooch was artistic BRILLIANCE. Spot on, dude. Spot on.

Jon, the Nighttime one was my favorite yet. You're fucking awesome.

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 9:41 PM
Jon, I love you. But if I ever find out that you're stealing these comics from a German newspaper, I'll have to cut your throat.
sounds fair to me, BUDDY!

and it would also really surprise me if germany would be allowed to public comics of this nature. they're a bunch of nazis.

tuna: why thank you :D

Voracious32
05-16-2008, 9:44 PM
and it would also really surprise me if germany would be allowed to public comics of this nature. they're a bunch of nazis.


I hope you're joking. If not, I have just lost all of my respect for you.

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 9:56 PM
I hope you're joking. If not, I have just lost all of my respect for you.

yeah that nazis part was completely unnecessary, really screwed up there.
what i mean though is aren't they really strict about media and etc?

Voracious32
05-16-2008, 10:03 PM
yeah that nazis part was completely unnecessary, really screwed up there.
what i mean though is aren't they really strict about media and etc?

I don't think so. Perhaps you're thinking of Russia? There's been controversy lately about the Russian media being intimidated by the government.

Urser was referring to another comic-maker who, a while ago, made a series of funny comics which turned out to be stolen from a German paper.
It was Beatzebs, was it not? Was he permabanned?

jontheninja
05-16-2008, 10:09 PM
I don't think so. Perhaps you're thinking of Russia? There's been controversy lately about the Russian media being intimidated by the government.

Urser was referring to another comic-maker who, a while ago, made a series of funny comics which turned out to be stolen from a German paper.
It was Beatzebs, was it not? Was he permabanned?
XD that makes sense then.

I guess he thought Germans don't come to explosm.
But they do, oh God they do.

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-17-2008, 12:53 AM
And then they say german things! Oh, the horror!

gordanthefree
05-17-2008, 3:50 AM
Jon rather than posting links, post the actual comic :). BUT YOU RULE! :patriot:

Jezzas
05-17-2008, 6:56 AM
Oh, and if mine are terrible, just tell me so I know to stop posting. :D

I think it's too close. I'll leave it out.

Hayden
05-17-2008, 7:18 AM
So you basically took an image from the internet, then added an explosm character onto it?

No joke, and as far as I can tell, no effort. Try harder.

Relaps
05-17-2008, 7:20 AM
April-10-2005, Rob.

http://www.explosm.net/db/files/Comics/evolution.jpg

Jezzas
05-17-2008, 7:39 AM
April-10-2005, Rob.


Thanks, yeah it's close enough for me to take it out. I'll make something else instead then.

jontheninja
05-17-2008, 8:09 AM
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6715/aaballsio4.th.png (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aaballsio4.png)
THEY ALSO MAKE THE GIRLS LAUGH.

Relaps
05-17-2008, 8:10 AM
I haven't even heard that variation before.


Good work, Jon.

Tweek
05-17-2008, 9:21 AM
Ahahahahaha you are funny man.

MusicalIdiot
05-17-2008, 10:08 AM
♪♫♪Happy Birthday to me.♪♫♪
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7230/cnhfc46rc1.png

Power
05-17-2008, 10:10 AM
<3 Musicial Idiot
<3 Jon

Your comics are great but jon should get rid of his prejudices^^

jontheninja
05-17-2008, 10:11 AM
♪♫♪Happy Birthday to me.♪♫♪
RAINBOWCOMIC
haha nice one! always wished there'd be a game like that, with rainbow blood.
Power: i think i gave myself a bad reputation accidentally :(

Relaps
05-17-2008, 10:21 AM
Shitty birthday macro GOOOOOO

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/1985/smchbdayys2.jpg

PyroOwned
05-17-2008, 10:57 AM
Aww. <3

I laughed quite hard at yours, MI.

Jon, I love you.

This thread just made my day.

MusicalIdiot
05-17-2008, 11:06 AM
I shall treasure this sammich forever, or until my next birthday, or until I forget my birthday happened next week; but still, I thank thee.

Lag
05-17-2008, 11:41 AM
Power: i think i gave myself a bad reputation accidentally :(

Nobody who matters cares. So don't fret me boy-o. :shobon:

Slurpy
05-17-2008, 12:01 PM
MI that was fantastic! ^^

Jon, I like your comics, but I would suggest you make them a little bit smaller, so they fit the table. And link them with IMG tags.

wasted space
05-17-2008, 12:18 PM
I don't think so. Perhaps you're thinking of Russia? There's been controversy lately about the Russian media being intimidated by the government.

Urser was referring to another comic-maker who, a while ago, made a series of funny comics which turned out to be stolen from a German paper.
It was Beatzebs, was it not? Was he permabanned?

Germany has really strict media. For example, in german video games you can't kill people, only robots, so instead of blood animations there are just bolts and stuff that fly out of bad dude's bodies.

_Atheistic_
05-17-2008, 2:57 PM
MI your back, and fully loaded with genius comics! (I hope.)

Loved yours too jon.

Dag
05-17-2008, 3:03 PM
Everything by me this time :cool:

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7217/mangazt8.png

TwinYawgmoth
05-17-2008, 3:10 PM
Hm...indeed, Germany's media does apply censorship in a way. I absolutely hate it that they cut out all the scenes with violence in it out of movies, which means all the showdowns. GREAT. Also, I fail to see the point of games like Empire Earth being adult-only (!).

Then again, we have no problem at all with nudity or controverse issues. Okay, it depends on the issues - noone will be able to produce a film that glorifies Hitler, for example, even as a joke. But that's country-specific, ofc.

I wouldn't say our media was STRICTER than others. It has its own rules, rules most of us find stupid, including me...but that's just a system that's overprotective, not overregulative. I would be more pissed at having to live in a country as prude as America, when it comes to issues that have to be kept from the eyes of children (aka SEX)...or alcohol only at 21, now THAT's overly strict ^^.

Back to the point, I loved most of the recent comics - thank you all for making this thread enjoyable. Happy birthday, MI.

Oh, and I haven't recognized any German newspapers in here of late, if anyone wants to ask :D.

LaPhBu
05-17-2008, 3:13 PM
Wow, that was confusing.

Just in case someone doesn't get it, the comic goes...

1 2 and not 1 2
4 3 3 4
5 6 5 6
8 7 7 8

jontheninja
05-17-2008, 3:14 PM
Dag, that made me laugh at the whole concept. Good idea.
also, feminism.
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4439/girlhj5.png

Dag
05-17-2008, 3:58 PM
Wow, that was confusing.

Just in case someone doesn't get it, the comic goes...

1 2 and not 1 2
4 3 3 4
5 6 5 6
8 7 7 8
No. Since it should illustrate a manga, the correct order is:
2 1
4 3
6 5
8 7

It is also quite difficult to understand your explanation with this formatting ;-)

Haha, that dog really is a "bitch" :lol:

Lag
05-17-2008, 3:59 PM
It reads from right to left then?

Dag
05-17-2008, 4:10 PM
It reads from right to left then?
Yes, that is correct!

Traditionally, manga are written from top to bottom and right to left, as this is the traditional reading pattern of the Japanese written language.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manga

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-17-2008, 4:24 PM
Ah. Well I've created a character, he is cool.
And Jon. You are sometimes odd.


And he went to spaaaacceee.....http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm94/morgan-lunn/noair.png Sounds pleasurable!





I am anti-Mac.

Relaps
05-17-2008, 5:53 PM
I am anti-Mac.

I don't see why that's got to do with anything. I mean, sure, Macbook Air, but there's nothing to solidly imply to that in your comic.

Voracious32
05-17-2008, 6:09 PM
Dag, that took me a while to get, but it was good.

NachoLover
05-17-2008, 8:04 PM
Im not getting the same laugh i get when i usually read the comics. What a shame.

Tweek
05-18-2008, 12:41 AM
MusicalIdiot, I love rainbows yay. Funny stuff.
Dag, that worked well brother.

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 3:20 AM
I don't see why that's got to do with anything. I mean, sure, Macbook Air, but there's nothing to solidly imply to that in your comic.
Here, better? http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm94/morgan-lunn/noa.png
The fire can burn because it has AIR!

Chips
05-18-2008, 3:23 AM
Wait a minute, that's my comic tournament entry... Emotibot :ahe:

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 3:24 AM
And I give you full credit for that character.

Because he is cool.

Slurpy
05-18-2008, 3:43 AM
Bu...buu...b-but what about Sombrerowl? Hes way cooler :wail:

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 3:57 AM
Bu...buu...b-but what about Sombrerowl? Hes way cooler :wail:

B...buuu....b-but what about Chuck Norris? He can divide by zero!

Tweek
05-18-2008, 4:00 AM
No he can't, get more funny.

Power
05-18-2008, 5:11 AM
Germany has really strict media. For example, in german video games you can't kill people, only robots, so instead of blood animations there are just bolts and stuff that fly out of bad dude's bodies.

That's totally wrong dumbass...

Some games are indexed but what you wrote is absolute shit. In Germany you can play almost every game you want, for example there is no GTA game on the index in Germany unlike in Australia.
Germany is one of the countries with freedom of press in the Basic Constitutional Law. I'm half Dane and half German and I know what I'm talking about and I know that you are one of those stupid Americans with loads of baseless prejudices, wasted space. Go give yourself a handjob. And leave this thread alone with your smattering.
Your posts are really a waste of space.

CIC this comic was to high brow for me =(

Jon that was the first lame comic I've seen from you.

Tweek
05-18-2008, 5:40 AM
I disagree, Jon's comic was pretty bitchin.

Tweek
05-18-2008, 5:49 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/30k3a01.png

Tyler_Legrand
05-18-2008, 5:59 AM
Tweek, that was dumb.

Tweek
05-18-2008, 6:01 AM
Would you mind explaining why?

Tyler_Legrand
05-18-2008, 6:05 AM
Yes, I would.

Dag
05-18-2008, 6:15 AM
Maybe because it's just a stupid buttsex-joke?

Power
05-18-2008, 6:21 AM
Featuring a double post?

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Tyler_Legrand
05-18-2008, 6:30 AM
http://www.legrandanimations.com/BreakIn.jpg

Gryphon
05-18-2008, 6:44 AM
Hahaha that's the greatest twist on a comic I've seen in a long time, sick job Tyler.

Dabamash
05-18-2008, 7:24 AM
That was great Tyler. I liked the art in it as well.

Jezzas
05-18-2008, 7:29 AM
That was awesome Tyler, my only criticism would be in the second frame, that the window is shown, and it doesn't appear broken. I'm aware that would ruin the joke if it was, but maybe if instead you had it on a different side of the sofa so that you don't see it until the end?

I don't know, I'm just being picky though. Well done, better than I could do by far. Haha.

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 7:37 AM
Tyler_Legrand, I don't get it, was the hot chocolate spiked or something?
Or was it a lesser felony? Like breaking the window.

Ox
05-18-2008, 7:42 AM
I think the joke is that the person who was being nice to her had actually broken into the house and was not supposed to be there. The crime being Breaking and Entering.

Tyler_Legrand
05-18-2008, 7:56 AM
That was awesome Tyler, my only criticism would be in the second frame, that the window is shown, and it doesn't appear broken.

True. Fixed; now it's even more of a mere outline of a window

I still want it there as an implication of a point of entry.

Jezzas
05-18-2008, 8:03 AM
True. Fixed; now it's even more of a mere outline of a window

I still want it there as an implication of a point of entry.

Fair enough, looks good to me! It's an awesome joke too, I like it.

sjeanke
05-18-2008, 10:55 AM
http://img19.imagevenue.com/loc736/th_29362_Untitled-2_122_736lo.jpg (http://img19.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=29362_Untitled-2_122_736lo.jpg)

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 11:43 AM
I think the joke is that the person who was being nice to her had actually broken into the house and was not supposed to be there. The crime being Breaking and Entering.

Then, it's not as funny as I thought it was! :wail:

Relaps
05-18-2008, 11:51 AM
Tyler doesn't draw funny.

He draws greatness.

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 12:01 PM
Correct! You won the jackpot of 1 pot of win!
You may implant it in your next comic.

jontheninja
05-18-2008, 12:25 PM
Here you go, fwends.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3978/nairnairnairve9.png
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2254/wiseguyhg9.png

a_hamburger
05-18-2008, 12:29 PM
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd206/a_hamburger/WWII.jpg

Common-Iron-Chloride
05-18-2008, 1:02 PM
Jon, I liked yours, a_hamburger; :gtfo:


EDIT: I liked the art but the joke was lacking...funny.

Power
05-18-2008, 1:27 PM
I don't get it a_hamburger o_O

spaj
05-18-2008, 1:31 PM
Jon, those were hilarious.

a_hamburger, I liked that, gave me a laugh

Guerrilla705
05-18-2008, 2:20 PM
A humburger I actually liked that for some reason, simple but funny. Don't make crap on your next comic and you have a chance at this

Voracious32
05-18-2008, 2:54 PM
It's called a grenade.

jontheninja
05-18-2008, 2:57 PM
Granate is German for grenade, isn't it?

a_hamburger
05-18-2008, 2:58 PM
Granate is German for grenade, isn't it?

Yes it is.

TwinYawgmoth
05-18-2008, 2:58 PM
Granate is German for grenade, isn't it?

Correct.

Not that I understood the joke any more with this knowledge, but maybe it was just intended as random.

a_hamburger
05-18-2008, 3:18 PM
Correct.

Not that I understood the joke any more with this knowledge, but maybe it was just intended as random.

Actually, he's giving his comrades a warning that a grenade is coming. Just kind a realism thing...

ne3
05-18-2008, 3:31 PM
That's fine a_hamburger, but that joke's already been used in a well-known flash called McDiddy's. Check for yourself.

Vortex
05-18-2008, 3:56 PM
What the fuck is McDiddy's?

Not bad Jon, but not as funny as your previous ones!

Tyler, i liked that a lot :) Sexcellent.

a_hamburger
05-18-2008, 4:05 PM
What the fuck is McDiddy's?


That's what I was thinking. Oops.

ne3
05-18-2008, 4:13 PM
Ok, I might've been exagerating when I said well-known, but it is known by a few. k.

jontheninja
05-18-2008, 4:21 PM
This one took me ages because I have no idea how to do shadows. I hope you guys like it though, and I really hope you all get the joke.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/638/gunstretchedgo5.png

some n00b
05-18-2008, 4:26 PM
Hahahahahaha!! jontheninja, I absolutely love you! I was starting to get bored then i saw you posted. And i'll explain it for you mate for people who dont understand. Well, there is a game that recently came out called NERF ball tag or whatever, and it's basically you have guns and vest things to wear and you shoot each other. Basically the cop and the kids guns got switched. Excellent comic.

Ox
05-18-2008, 4:59 PM
THANK YOU FOR EXPLAINING THE COMIC TO US. NOW PLEASE TELL US THAT ONE PLUS ONE IS TWO.

some n00b
05-18-2008, 5:02 PM
Indeed, one plus one equals two.

greenlalablue
05-18-2008, 5:35 PM
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/139/d/2/Comic_1_GOOD_VERSION_by_thy_hobbit.jpg

First comic I've ever made on the computer. You like?

Voracious32
05-18-2008, 6:10 PM
Jon, that was excellent.
Green, that was also pretty good. Better art than the standard for this site.

Guerrilla705
05-18-2008, 6:18 PM
Green that was actually pretty decent, the effort is apparent, good job! Jon, I personally would have found it even funnier without the last frame

jontheninja
05-18-2008, 6:33 PM
comic

First comic I've ever made on the computer. You like?
I like the concept, and the art is good too. It seems a tad bit long though, and I think it would be a bit funnier if you cut out some of the panels. You can leave some stuff to the imagination :)

Green that was actually pretty decent, the effort is apparent, good job! Jon, I personally would have found it even funnier without the last frame
Ya know, I totally agree with you. The only reason I left it is because I drew (in my opinion, at least) some bitchin' shadows and didn't want them to go to waste.

shonenboyz
05-18-2008, 7:21 PM
Guys, I've been watching this thread for a while and have found some excellent comics, and I would like to join in on the action! I made this and I really hope you all will like it as much as I do. Tell me what you think, tell me ways to improve, and keep up all the good work! If you like this, I have a lot more!!

I did this in paint though, so give me some slack. My IQ is also 67 (but I last took the test last July)
Edit: I was trying to use the Bob Marley song from I am Legend but I forgot it all.
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2015/jamacansch1.jpg

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Tweek
05-18-2008, 7:38 PM
Haha good work man :gj:

robochoco
05-18-2008, 10:14 PM
Racism! Love it! Totally original! shonenboyz taught me that murder causes bald spots.

gordanthefree
05-18-2008, 10:37 PM
Jon I LOVE YOU! (rather I love your comics). All the rest, good work.

Random_Hero
05-19-2008, 1:33 AM
You are allowed to just post parts of other comics you're doing, right?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v692/hingwon/FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU-.png

Relaps
05-19-2008, 1:39 AM
Rather you post the whole comic, frankly.

Random_Hero
05-19-2008, 1:42 AM
Well, I'm still working on it, and just wanted to share a part of it.

Relaps
05-19-2008, 1:44 AM
He's gotta poo really bad.

Random_Hero
05-19-2008, 1:45 AM
That, or he is going to kill Steve. I'm not sure where I'm going with it yet.

Inseln
05-19-2008, 3:22 AM
No, he's just trying to stop the hard on that'll prove he's gay. It's obvious.

LaPhBu
05-19-2008, 3:58 AM
I thought he was constipated out of happiness, and he was the "Steve" character. :indiff:

Tyler_Legrand
05-19-2008, 5:20 AM
It's probably just fine on its own

Well, basically there is a game that recently came out called NERF ball tag or whatever, and it's basically you have guns and vest things to wear and you shoot each other. Basically the cop and the kids guns got switched. Basically an xcellent comic.

Basically

Hayden
05-19-2008, 5:54 AM
Tyler: That was f*cking ace. I expected it but it just worked so well.

Jon: Ah your comics are almost always great, nice art and just the quirkiest little jokes.

Slurpy
05-19-2008, 7:39 AM
First comic I've ever made on the computer. You like?

Oh man, that was fucking brilliant. I really hope to see more from you =)

PyroOwned
05-19-2008, 7:40 AM
Hahahahahaha!! jontheninja, I absolutely love you! I was starting to get bored then i saw you posted. And i'll explain it for you mate for people who dont understand. Well, there is a game that recently came out called NERF ball tag or whatever, and it's basically you have guns and vest things to wear and you shoot each other. Basically the cop and the kids guns got switched. Excellent comic.
What the fuck is wrong with you.

Jon, I love your comics.