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cosmeticlobotomy
08-20-2007, 3:28 AM
Hey fans of Cyanide & Happiness,

I started a webcomic a little while ago (am currently on hiatus, working on improving the site [ie. We now have a 'feed'.]) but wanted to know what you thought thus far.

The site is Cosmetic Lobotomy (http://www.cosmeticlobotomy.com).

I was told about Cyanide & Happiness and said that my comic reminded them of it.

It's a great comic, I've read them all and am up to date.

Hopefully, I'll come out of hiatus by mid-September or sooner.

Oh, and if anyone wants to spruce up the site for me, I'd love you a lot.

Thanks!

Kwanza
08-20-2007, 3:37 AM
Sorry, but I didn't laugh at all. Nor, do I see any similarity at all.

Urser
08-20-2007, 4:50 AM
A lot of great artists have mental disabilities.

Just because you have a mental disability doesn't mean you're an artist.

:facts:

Hats of!
08-20-2007, 6:02 AM
Well if you can't draw I don't suggest Webbcomics.

Captain Insanity
08-20-2007, 7:02 AM
The crappyness of the website is the least of your worries mate. I'd work on the art and humour first. Seriously.

Ox
08-20-2007, 12:29 PM
Woeful is what springs to mind. The drawing look like they were done by a young child, the penmanship and attention to detail only suggest this further.

Piss poor / 10

Far
08-20-2007, 12:37 PM
It looks like your trying to be xckd but failing oh so terribly.

Kevosk
08-20-2007, 8:05 PM
That was terrible. For your own good give up webcomicking and become a doctor or something.

cosmeticlobotomy
08-20-2007, 8:13 PM
Did you start near the beginning? Have you skimmed the majority of them?

And thanks for the comments. :)

Lag
08-20-2007, 8:30 PM
So is the site name a quirky gag or your current state of mind?

It doesn't look like you even try to draw at all, and the humor seems like the random ramblings I hear from a friendly crazy black man near a Jim's Burger I sometimes visit.

Rebecca.
08-20-2007, 8:51 PM
I'm not one to bash others, but those comics really did suck. I would recommend getting Photoshop instead of drawing the comics by hand to improve the art (the comics became hard to read & were pretty sloppy), but I'm not sure how to make someone funny. Maybe you should take a little time off & then try your comics again, because right now it's not working out.

Relaps
08-20-2007, 11:30 PM
It's funny as shit if you realize it's probably fake.

Tempest
08-21-2007, 6:40 AM
It's funny as shit if you realize it's probably fake.

I agree, I chuckled a bit at the lackluster art and also at the strategic positioning of curse words.

TeamTom
08-21-2007, 7:05 AM
That was terrible. For your own good give up webcomicking and become a doctor or something.

:aaa: I'd rather just die than have a retard who obviously lacks manual skills treat me for something!

Beefynick
08-21-2007, 12:08 PM
It's funny as shit if you realize it's probably fake.

I agree, but it still was a waste of my time to even have clicked the link.