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08-25-2007, 1:26 AM
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Complete Newb
Since Mar 2007
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Just some Warhammer 40k stuff, all in pencil:
 http://1337www.deviantart.com/art/Chaos-Pencil-61397913  http://1337www.deviantart.com/art/Tw...ayals-63205558 Anyone else into WH40k? Hope you like :) Crit welcome
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08-25-2007, 2:59 AM
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Since May 2007
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Good shading and all that stuff.
But I think you should continue drawing bodies. So you can make the hands and such a bit more realistic. |
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08-25-2007, 4:56 AM
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Regular
Since May 2007
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I like the shading you did, and other stuff, exept from the chaos characters, they have way bigger heads, the rest I can't really put my finger on. But improve the body drawings as Hats Of! said.
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08-25-2007, 10:54 AM
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 Since Apr 2007
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As stated before, nice shading and stuff, but you need to work on the hands.
EDIT: Oh, by the way. Maybe it's just me, but I can't figure out what the thing on the right on the first drawing is. I see a sword, and some teeth.. Is it in some weird angle or something? 
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08-25-2007, 11:27 AM
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Sammich King
Since Jan 2005
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Oh, you meant the creature. Yeah, kinda wondering that myself.
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08-25-2007, 1:13 PM
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Somewhat Regular
Since Mar 2006
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Looks like a typical teenager's doodles, but spread out on a large canvas and filled in very well. Perspective of one section clashes with another, and the bodies are awkwardly drawn - this is no biggie, though, as practice makes perfect.
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08-25-2007, 7:00 PM
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Somewhat Regular
Since Aug 2007
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It's fucking awesome if you don't mind the hands and lack of proportion
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08-25-2007, 7:16 PM
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Saver of Humens
Since Dec 2004
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The detail is well thought-out, but you should put more work into proportions and poses so your characters don't look ridiculous.
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08-30-2007, 6:36 AM
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Walking Wikipedia
Since Jan 2005
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The first one is awesome. The demon is looks great, and the marine looks ok. Nice dreadnought in the background.
The second one (Kharn the Betrayer?) looks like it would be awesome if the proportions were more correct. I can't get enough 40k art... I'll watch on DA. |
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08-30-2007, 10:01 AM
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Since Oct 2006
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Attention to detail, shading and content is awesome. But like Rob said, study comic books for more dramatic, dynamic poses. Or your well drawn characters just seem moronic.
I have a book on action comic style drawing by the man himself, Stan Lee. Look it up, it's an awesome resource for shading technics, how to pose figures and a whole bunch more. |
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08-31-2007, 9:33 AM
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Regular
Since Feb 2007
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Likewise, I like the first one the best. Although I feel the raptor could be a bit better, just redrawn. Nice detailing, always good to see Warhammer art.
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