Relaps' Art Crap (Images Herein!)

Relaps · 09-09-2007, 10:18 PM

So I was like "I wonder how well I can do buff doods with shade and glint."

Critiques required.

InTransit · 09-09-2007, 10:26 PM

The face and the muscles and everything looks awesome.

But he looks sad and like he has scoliosis.

Relaps · 09-09-2007, 10:28 PM

His shower only came in cold water.

InTransit · 09-09-2007, 10:33 PM

Shit, I'd be pissed about that too. Poor dude.

Vortex · 09-09-2007, 11:41 PM

His pecs are most sexcellent. His body is pretty damn buff, to be quite honest. I don't like his hair though. It looks too flat. Then again, this doesn't look like you spent 12 hours minimum on it, so I like it!

GCBC · 09-10-2007, 12:33 AM

I'd totally do that dude.

Urser · 09-10-2007, 2:00 AM

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I'd totally do that dude.

Amen sister.

But what really annoys me is his pointy chin and lack of a forehead. Nice job though!

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 2:27 AM

I made another guy. Instead of a new thread, I'll put his ass here.

This is actually a City of Villians character I made once.

Again, critiques welcome.

ne3 · 09-10-2007, 5:37 AM

For some reason, his right arm looks misplaced, like it was bended or something. Everything else is cool.

Shmuh · 09-10-2007, 5:41 AM

[NOTE: I AM A RETARD]!!!1
those are awesome btw

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 5:49 AM

Those in wonder: I don't spend heaps of time on these, whether its obvious or not.

Might do more later.

Jiggz · 09-10-2007, 5:49 AM

I feel reposting about Relaps' awesomeness is becoming mundane. But still, nice work as usual.

There's definitely something obscure about his right arm..

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 5:52 AM

It's thrust outward in a dastardly (or bastardly) manner.

Still, nothing's perfect. CERTAINLY not my illustrations, but I like 'em.

Tyler_Legrand · 09-10-2007, 7:03 AM

I think you need a tad less lines. They seem like a waste of time for such simplicity. For example, supposing you attempted a life drawing, it'd be counterproductive to draw every single possible line (possible, for your body isn't actually made up of lines at all) thickly and boldy. It'd be a mess. You would instead choose which lines should be lighter and which should be darker, no? Similarly to your simpler drawing, using only thick bold lines, you'd have to decide if adding each line would create or hinder the volume of the body.

[/JonC]

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But what really annoys me is his pointy chin and lack of a forehead. Nice job though!

Why is everyone always so down on the pointy chins?

I_Smell · 09-10-2007, 12:09 PM

Because they're so jealous.

On the second one, his sleeve doesn't look like it's on his arm (Right arm). Like it's just floating around right now.

On the first one, you should've done loads of shadow on his right arm.
You should do something ludicrously beasty like the guy from Dad n Me. Cos that's what I thought when I saw them.

GCBC · 09-10-2007, 12:11 PM

You know I love your art. But with these guys the one thing I don't like is that their heads are too small for their bodies, in my opinion. I don't know if that is a perspective thing, or done on purpose, or whatever.

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 4:42 PM

The second one is perspective. Also, it's supposed to be like, shadow of his trechcoat eveloping his wrists.

Shadowy arms? Okays.

Matterialize · 09-10-2007, 6:25 PM

In the second one, his left arm (OUR right) should be bigger - even with perspective. It just looks malformed now.

Everything else is top, though. 'Specially the first guy's pecs.

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 7:10 PM

Greyscale Bastardly.

I'm off to go see Shoot 'Em Up.

Dacada · 09-10-2007, 8:34 PM

They don't have eyebrows. :0

Relaps · 09-10-2007, 9:52 PM

Meh! Meh on eyebrows.

Rebecca. · 09-10-2007, 10:10 PM

Love Greyguy. [jealous] Your art is great [/jealous]. Also, fuck eyebrows.

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 4:51 AM

I like this one. Yes I does.

Shagg · 09-12-2007, 5:01 AM

Sooo.. theres only one Jailhouse Bitch? That's one lonely gang...

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 5:05 AM

Shush, I didn't feel like drawing a bunch. Bastardly took up most of the canvas anyway.

I just wanted to show more than one guy at a time.

Far · 09-12-2007, 5:05 AM

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Originally Posted by ShaggMuffin

Sooo.. theres only one Jailhouse Bitch? That's one lonely gang...

Nah you should know, He's a thug Mastermind(appears to be anyway). He's got 6 henchmen plus gangwar which is crazy mad on the pets. Seems like he might be dark miasma secondary, maybe forcefield, hard to tell.

/off CoV garble.

I really like these Relaps, keep em coming.

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 5:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Far

Nah you should know, He's a thug Mastermind(appears to be anyway).

Ding.

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He's got 6 henchmen plus gangwar which is crazy mad on the pets.

Ding.

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Seems like he might be dark miasma secondary, maybe forcefield, hard to tell.

Acutally, I went Technology. Web Grenades are fun/useless.

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I really like these Relaps, keep em coming.

I shall. I like Bastardly Bill.

Far · 09-12-2007, 5:18 AM

Should have said traps cause of the eye dealie. I was close either way.

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 5:20 AM

Eh, the character customization said it was a "monocle."

Far · 09-12-2007, 5:22 AM

Really? I expect them to have a more classic monocle to be honest. They've got nearly everything else.

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 5:23 AM

Whatever.

I'm off to bed, more artcrap tomorrow.

Matterialize · 09-12-2007, 10:44 AM

Give him a real monocle >:0

But then you can add more tech-stuff to him, like maybe a bionic arm or something.

Zebbs · 09-12-2007, 11:19 AM

Try it in sepia, for that coffee stain effect.

Relaps · 09-12-2007, 5:04 PM

That requires things that go into different programs and stuff.

Mebbeh later for sepia.

Shagg · 09-12-2007, 5:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Far

Nah you should know, He's a thug Mastermind(appears to be anyway). He's got 6 henchmen plus gangwar which is crazy mad on the pets. Seems like he might be dark miasma secondary, maybe forcefield, hard to tell.

/off CoV garble.

I really like these Relaps, keep em coming.

Shh! We must keep City Of Villains a secret!

P.S- Relaps, you play CoH/CoV?