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09-14-2007, 12:27 AM
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We were learning about this stuff in history and how it was used it Vietnam and I was like "agent orange sounds sort of like some kind of crime fighting dude" and everyone else was like "..." and I was like "yeah fuck you guys" and made this cartoon.
   What do you guys think?
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09-14-2007, 12:34 AM
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it's ok... but a little too hyper for a comic... make some pause panels, maybe if it were animated... way different
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09-14-2007, 12:36 AM
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You can kinda tell you rushed it. The execution of the joke would explain your classmate's reaction.
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09-14-2007, 12:38 AM
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Quote:
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09-14-2007, 12:49 AM
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Shit.
Sorry, I voted 'cause I thought it was about the band. They put on wonderful concerts. Uhh. I got excited..>.> Anyway, the comic isn't too bad. But I'm sure you could've executed the situation better. Just treat it like a story or school paper and make another 'draft'. After a few it'll probably be better. If not, then I recommend asking for a bit of assistance or pointers. :P
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09-14-2007, 6:44 AM
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I liked the last panel.
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09-14-2007, 8:10 AM
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I liked "Did somebody juat say... TOXIN?" because noone did and I don't get it. Also, I struggled to read carcinogenic lead, making it all the funnier.
I thought it was gonna be about the other Agent Orange =/
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09-15-2007, 1:37 AM
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I sniggered. His eyebrow-raise could have been higher and the art could have been better, but who's complaining when you have a last panel with a guy who has a cigarette puncturing his throat?
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09-17-2007, 1:02 PM
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It was okay, I laughed. My dad was exposed to Agent Orange in Nam!
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09-17-2007, 5:57 PM
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You got about one tenth of a chuckle.
In other words it's somewhere between "It needs a lot of work" and "It sucks so much cock I can not even begin to describe"
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09-17-2007, 11:39 PM
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I gave it 5 for excellence and /5 because I wanted to.
Eat that Viet Congs.
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