Round 1-Spiffy13 VS Lag

Far · 10-05-2007, 1:13 AM

Pick who goes first and Start the fightin'.

Mr Anorexia · 10-05-2007, 6:05 AM

I have alot of work the next 2 days, so would you mind beginning?

Far · 10-05-2007, 11:23 AM

I guess there was some find of communication break down. Mr. A is out of the tournament and Lag will take his place for this battle.

Spiffy13 · 10-05-2007, 11:28 AM

Hm... okay. Lag, you wanna go first?
Also, how long do we have to make each comic again?

Assassin · 10-05-2007, 11:29 AM

Nooooooooooooooooooo...

Far · 10-05-2007, 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffy13

Hm... okay. Lag, you wanna go first?
Also, how long do we have to make each comic again?

Two days. The first attack needs to be made by Saturday at 11:59 EST.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Assassin

Nooooooooooooooooooo...

Sorry. Dropping Mr.A allowed me to even out the rounds and I wasn't really comfortable letting someone get through the first round free. Plus you guys confused me.

Lag · 10-05-2007, 2:08 PM

I was supposed to get a free ride!

Anywho, sure, I'll go first. I'ma git you man-ina-can!

Lag · 10-05-2007, 10:58 PM

If Relaps can double, so can I! Yeah!

The first spud has been fired!

Vortex · 10-05-2007, 11:34 PM

I personally have no clue what happened in that comic, Lag. I've been trying to make sense of it for about 10 minutes. Perhaps I'm a moron.

Spiffy13 · 10-05-2007, 11:47 PM

He put something in my rocket and I blew up.

I love the "tally ho!" btw xD

Lag · 10-05-2007, 11:47 PM

For the sake of Vortex.
1. Fred prepares for attack.
2. He attacks.
3. Sassy gets disturbed while relaxing.
4. Panned to see Fred still charging.
5. Sassy gets confused as to his attack.
6. Sassy finds a potato!
7. Sassy remembers the assailant.
8. Whoosh!
9. Sassy's taken for a ride!
10. Sassy panics!
11. The potato!
12. Like clogging a car's exhaust, only with jets n such.
13. Fred's grim realization.
14. Boom
15. Stuck the landing.

hzac · 10-06-2007, 1:08 AM

Interesting, I wouldnt of got it without the explaination though.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 1:24 AM

wasn't that hard to understand it for me :P

Flyingburittopanda · 10-06-2007, 4:31 AM

HaHa loved the Awesome sunglasses landing part. =]

I understood it easily and im an Ar-tard.

Good work.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 4:36 PM

I'm working on mine :)

Soul · 10-06-2007, 4:46 PM

It was nice though it took me a while to figure out what happened.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 6:14 PM

Is Sassy a sasquach?

If I don't get an answer I'm just gonna pretend he is :P

Lag · 10-06-2007, 8:18 PM

He is.

Although sometimes I like to think he's just a wandering hobo with attitude...

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 9:12 PM

Okay, I'm done. Just gotta scan it and add a little touches :)

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 10:09 PM

Ugghh... when I scanned it it came out all... bad. It's hard to read/see the things. So I decided to go over it with a pen, and now it's too smudgy >.<

Which one should I use??

Bah, sorry for double post :(

Lag · 10-06-2007, 10:16 PM

Had the same problem, luckily I was able to print a copy and pen it over. You still have like, a day? So you should be able to fix it up.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 10:18 PM

I have 41 minutes...... :(

SODA · 10-06-2007, 10:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffy13

I have 41 minutes...... :(

Old 10-05-2007, 11:58 PM + 2 days = 10-07-2007 11:58PM est
No you have another day.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Far

Two days. The first attack needs to be made by Saturday at 11:59 EST.

I think that means I have 41 minutes :P

SODA · 10-06-2007, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffy13

I think that means I have 41 minutes :P

I think it says "THE FIRST ATTACK" which was made at 11:58PM EST yesterday.

Far · 10-06-2007, 10:26 PM

You have until tomorrow at 11:58 pm EST.

Spiffy13 · 10-06-2007, 10:39 PM

Ahhh... I totally misunderstood, lol. Thanks for clearing things up :)

PyroOwned · 10-07-2007, 6:38 AM

Heh, that was alright Lag. I like your character.

Spiffy13 · 10-07-2007, 5:18 PM

Fred's retaliation:

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...scan0003-1.jpg

If it's too hard or too smudgy to read, just say so.

Fixed the letters.

Soul · 10-07-2007, 5:27 PM

Ill be honest I thought it was pretty bad. The dialogue and the art.

Spiffy13 · 10-07-2007, 5:38 PM

damnit... I'll try to make a new one... I guess >.<

popl8 · 10-07-2007, 6:29 PM

I dunno, I thought it was funny in a stupid kind of way, but make sure your second one has some kind of attack, maybe spend a little longer on the art too, but all in all it was that bad.

Far · 10-07-2007, 6:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spiffy13

damnit... I'll try to make a new one... I guess >.<

If you make a new one it has to be in by 11:58 EST today. So 4 and a half hours from now.

Spiffy13 · 10-07-2007, 6:37 PM

Okay, I'll wait for the next attack.

Far · 10-07-2007, 6:40 PM

Just wanted you to know so you didn't get caught. I mean you can try to make a new one and if you don't finish just use the one you have now.

Spiffy13 · 10-07-2007, 6:43 PM

Anyone have any suggestions on how to make my second one better? (Other then art)

Goblin Boy · 10-07-2007, 6:46 PM

Your handwriting is really hard to read. Once you scan it you should re-type it all in photoshop or whatever you're using.

Spiffy13 · 10-07-2007, 6:47 PM

That's what I thought. Okay, I'll do that. Well... I'll try, lol.

popl8 · 10-07-2007, 6:48 PM

Personally I use a pencil to sketch it first, then when I am happy I draw the final product with a biro, use a rubber to get rid of the pencil lines and done, looks nice and clean and a lot better than one which is drawn as you think.

Lag · 10-07-2007, 6:54 PM

Fat Sassy will not stand for this!

(or much at all)