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Old 08-20-2007, 2:19 AM       Post #1  
rawdawg
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In the last few months I've been learning Photoshop. I've done a little bit of photo editing, but my real passion so far has been space scenes. I'll admit that I think some of them are crap. What do you think though?
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http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5839/sun2copydz5.jpg
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http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4803/roidsfz5.jpg
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Edited Note Last edited by Ox : 08-20-2007 at 3:52 PM. (Massive table-breaking. Bad.)
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Old 08-20-2007, 4:53 AM       Post #2  
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They're too messy. Space isn't cluttered.

If I had to choose a favourite, it would probably be the first because of the simplicity. However... lensflares for the lose.


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Old 08-20-2007, 5:20 AM       Post #3  
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As urser implied, simplicity is better.

Sure, exploding planets are mega-awesome, but if you're making a space picture make it smooth and simple. Pictures of space should be majestic and capture a sense of grandiose.

Anyway, the art itself is okay. Make it more simplistic and it'll stand out more.
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Old 08-20-2007, 6:03 AM       Post #4  
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I like 1 and 5 the most. The planets look too flat, not spherical at all But i do like the simpler ones.


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Old 08-20-2007, 3:13 PM       Post #5  
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Way to break the tables like fuck.

Anyways, they are ok, but not much to interest the viewers.

+The last one is just awful.
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Old 08-20-2007, 11:00 PM       Post #6  
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Your planets are too flat. I suggest learning the sphere-ize filter, as well as effects of the blur tool. Stars aren't that uniform, and come in different sizes and clusters. Try some variation with them. Also, taking a smooth brush and blobbing out a pink / orange ish nebula would also help. Filter > Render > clouds on a seperate layer, and then overlaying them is another way to do stardust clouds or nebulas. For the sun, when you use the lens flare filter for a sun, the 105 mm prime works best in my opinion. FINALLY, to make a planet, go google a terrain or a planet landscape, and paste it into the O you can make with the elipse tool, and you can color / sphereize from there. Heres an example of how it looks when it comes together.

Note, I didn't do a nebula here.


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Old 08-20-2007, 11:25 PM       Post #7  
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pretty good, you need to work on the earths texture a bit.


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Old 08-21-2007, 4:22 PM       Post #8  
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It's kind of cool, but nothing incredibly special. Also, go with more variation when it comes to the stars.


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